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Flowers Would Gasp

Once knew this man from Peru His body odour was disgusting peewww Whenever he passed Flowers would gasp As the air turned a violety blue

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/20/2021 9:23:00 AM

This is your best one today, Jack. Funnny! We have a gentlemen often encountered in the local post office who stinks up the entire place. It's pretty disgusting. I wonder what causes that odor????

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/20/2021 10:09:00 AM

Arm pits, crotch, breath, to name just to name a few! WOW Happy Saturday my friend!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/20/2021 6:12:00 AM

LOL!!!! ;D,

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/20/2021 8:06:00 AM

Me too!!! XOX

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/20/2021 5:56:00 AM

Chuck him a bar of soap lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/20/2021 8:07:00 AM

Don't know if even that would do it!!! LOL