Flowers Would Gasp

Once knew this man from Peru His body odor was disgusting peewww Whenever he passed Flowers would gasp As the air turned a violety blue
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Tor Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 7:52 PM
That violetly blue color Jack is methane lol
Ellison Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 8:37 PM
LOL Thanks for the info!!!
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Someone needs a good scrub.
Ellison Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 3:12 PM
Kids say the darndest thing! LOL
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 7:09 AM
LOL!!!! Gotta read this to Brad when he gets home. A favourite story of his youngest son, when little, farted on a flower all tickled with himself that when someone comes to smell that flower they're going to smell his fart ;), xomo
Ellison Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Bottom burps!!! Love it! Maureen, let me know how Brad reacted XOX
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Haha, Maureen, my grandsons are at that age, bottom burps lol
Ellison Avatar
May 25, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Cute and hilarious!!! Kids eh! Hilarious again! If I did that, the flower would cough and keel over, shrivel up and die! LOL XOX
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