Flowers of Life

I don’t have much concern for flowers now
For it is ice and mist in my garden
The pale green grass does not understand how
To shake off the sucking cold snow burden

My larks look shabby and the thrushes sad
No effort to get some good sun succeeds
The hazy climate for the mood is bad
For some sun in glistening ice misleads

Me to fresh rhododendrons in your smiles
From your white teeth toward my empty tree
Prodding me in a pursuit for some miles
In the frost suddenly a morning spree

Flowers on the river shore never fade
However time tries to be on grass blade 
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21 August 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Krampe Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations; this is a lovely sonnet.
Gupta Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Thank you Agnes ...
Nusker Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 5:28 AM
Probir, very well deserved winning entry. Congratulations!
Gupta Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Thank you ...
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Probir, congratulations on your fine placement in the contest for your lovely Sonnet. Sandra
Gupta Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Thank you ...
Chansarkar Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Totally reflects your skill Probir. Loved the piece!
Gupta Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Thank you ...
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 6:32 AM
- Beautifully written with a slightly sad feeling ..... however, your flowers will bloom again, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 11:14 AM
I have not spoken of my flowers ... Anyway, thank you for liking ...
Trifiatis Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 2:15 AM
Tender feelings the heart expresses with the mastery of your pen dear, Probir! Excellent my friend!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 5:36 AM
It is my comment my friend, not yours, Haha! I mean it!
Gupta Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 5:42 AM
'Tender feelings the heart expresses' is okay, but 'the mastery of pen' cannot be agreed to ... Be that as it may, thank you ...
Vaso Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 12:21 AM
Such a beautiful sonnet!
Gupta Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 12:26 AM
Thank you ...
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