Banjo Casto Poet Verse

Flowers In a Carriage

The horses stoop
when autumn blows,
snuffing echoes
of cheerful plains.

Wheels load frail boughs
down  time’s remains
where carriage claims
all flowers, gone.



Ride On A Pathya Vat
From Banjo Casto
Aug 5, 2014
Theme: Carriage

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Casarah Nance August 11, 2014 at 6:23 PM wonderful! Grats on your winning Pathya :)

Debbie Guzzi August 11, 2014 at 2:55 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 11, 2014 at 5:48 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome poem Banjo!

Nette Onclaud August 10, 2014 at 10:56 AM you brought me to the poignant end of a season and created a mood so deeply ingrained, banjo.. thanks for supporting my contest and huge cheers on your high win.. huggs

Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 9:23 AM dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta August 10, 2014 at 5:26 AM Congratulations, Mohan, on this fine win.

Jan Allison August 5, 2014 at 12:20 PM A beautiful write- good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan x

Nette Onclaud August 5, 2014 at 12:19 PM thank you for entering, banjo.. huggs