Flowers Greet Bees

FLOWERS GREET BEES            Pantoum

        Around flowers busy bees are humming
        Flowers hold honey in heart to offer.
        Bees suck, collect honey fleeing and coming.
        Pollen sticking wings and legs may scatter.

         Flowers hold honey in heart to offer
         Honey is stored in bees’ home: honey-comb.
         Pollen sticking wings and legs may scatter.
         Ovulation occurs in flower’s womb.

        Honey is stored in bees’ home: honey-comb.
        Storage supplies food for bees in winter.
       Ovulation occurs in flower’s womb,
       pollen may fall on ovum of flower.  
       
        Storage supplies food for bees in winter.
        Bees suck, collect honey fleeing and coming.
        Pollen may fall on ovum of flower.
        Around flowers busy bees are humming.   

       09/29/16
                      Pantoum Poem Contest . First Place   

          Third place
     'YOUR CHOICE FLOWER VERSE'  Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 6/27/2019 7:40:00 PM
A beautiful pantoum, Anisha. You illuminate this symbiotic relationship wonderfully with your lovely imagery. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/27/2019 11:47:00 PM
Thanks Susan. Best wishes n love.
Date: 6/25/2019 4:33:00 AM
This is impressive Anisha. I have never been able to write a Pantoum. Congratulations on your podium win with this wonderful poem. : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/27/2019 11:46:00 PM
Thanks Connie to appreciate. Pantoum is so easy to wite. Just try.
Date: 6/24/2019 11:02:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Anisha. Well done.
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Date: 6/25/2019 12:26:00 AM
hanks Line for visit n appreciation
Date: 10/17/2016 8:07:00 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/25/2019 12:27:00 AM
Thanks Eve for continuous support.
Date: 10/17/2016 10:02:00 AM
Hi Anisha, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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