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Flowers Emerge

Flowers Emerge Impose your will on the pretty flowers as you may Trans-formative wonderment of nature Entrenched, defiled, they pop up any way in clusters Vivacious are the colors above the solid stem Cut cold to death, decay and pain, to follow winters grip Excellence defined in the ability to survive Dangerous are the forces that persist to derogate them Yet they prevail against all odds Death comes but they regenerate Grass is their shield. Dirt is their pillow there Negative winds carry with them ice Reds and yellows grow on below the sun Visceral, strangled roots, fragile faces, petal soft, grow cold Ingenious species, green with envy on the leaf, rise again A Cacophony of nature’s birds and bees disturbs the peace Flowers come in abundance, remain, friendly on the green Distinguished in divine fashion, exquisite, generous to the last Elevated smiles on pollen grains contain the seed of life Flowers emerge, aware of life 11/22/14 Poetry Contest - "Encounters With Flowers"

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Date: 12/1/2014 8:55:00 AM
Wonderful, Earl! You captured the beauty and resilience of fragile blooms...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/1/2014 9:27:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, I appreciate your comments and glad that you enjoyed it. Congratulations to you too on your excellent win. Earl
Date: 11/28/2014 5:10:00 PM
Back with my congratulations Earl. Well deserved win.
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:30:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much. Congratulations to you too on a fine win in the contest. Take care. Earl
Date: 11/28/2014 4:49:00 PM
Brilliant! Fav! Congratulations on your win!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/28/2014 5:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Maurice. Congratulations on your win. You should have placed in the #1 spot or #1 spot. In other words, the #1 spot. Your poem was very clever and well composed. Have a great week end. Earl
Date: 11/28/2014 11:59:00 AM
What an encounter, Earl...great writing. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:27:00 PM
Hi Faye, Thank you so much. Congratulations to you too for your excellent poem and win. You should have placed higher in the contest in my estimation. Have a great week end. Earl
Date: 11/28/2014 11:30:00 AM
WOW Earl I am blown away by the sheer brilliance of your beautiful poem many congrats on your win - its a 7 from me! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:02:00 PM
Hi Jan, I appreciate your encouragement. This poem is one of my personal favorites. I put a lot of energy and thought into it. I think that it is as solid as a rock. (putting my ego aside.) Thank you for the 7. With the 7 that they gave me does that mean I'm worth 14? (just kidding) Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it too. Take care. Earl
Date: 10/28/2014 12:46:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful Earl. The only way I could describe how much I love your poem would be to write a poem about how much I love this. But because my time is limited today, I will just give you a 7 and favourite this.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/28/2014 5:09:00 PM
Wonderfully done.
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 10/28/2014 4:01:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much for your generous evaluation and appreciation regarding my poem. I tried to employ a technique of alternating a dark line with a light line or a positive line followed by a negative concept and so on. I also tried to stay focused on the subject, the flowers. Thank you again for your interest and kind words. Take care. Earl

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