Shrineetee Kar | + Follow Poet |
Alliteration | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

Flowers

Blissfully unaware of the DANGER in the GARDEN
Flowers bloomed, blossomed and burgeoned the big way
But in vicinity of mankind, there is no leeway
Public in Park Picked, Plucked, Pulverizing Plethora of Petals.


18.12.2015



For 4 lines - Poetry Contest by  Silent One

Copyright © Shrineetee Kar | Year Posted 2015

Please Login to post a comment

Skat A Date: 12/24/2015 11:01:00 AM S.K, a pleasure to read :) have yourself A wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year....... SKAT LOVE Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 12/25/2015 12:10:00 AM Thanks SKAT A. You too have a Merry Christmas and a Wonderful Year ahead. Regards. Shrineetee.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/22/2015 2:00:00 AM Lovely write n win Shrineetee.. big congrats! Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 12/22/2015 3:32:00 AM Thank you. Congratulations to you too. Regards. shrineetee.

Susan Gentry Date: 12/21/2015 7:22:00 AM Congratulations on 2nd place win! I really enjoyed the last line especially. Great writing. Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 12/22/2015 3:30:00 AM Thanks. Appreciate the good words. Regards. Shrineetee.

Paul Callus Date: 12/21/2015 7:10:00 AM A lovely and clever entry, Shrineetee! Congratulations on a most worthy win. Regards *^* paul Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 12/22/2015 3:27:00 AM Thanks for the sending the nice wishes my way. Regards. shrineetee.

John Lawless Date: 12/20/2015 9:37:00 PM Congrats on your placement Shrineetee Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 12/20/2015 11:11:00 PM Thanks for visiting this one and sending these wishes my way. Regards. shrineetee.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/20/2015 7:23:00 PM WELL DONE!!! I am glad to see this one high on the winner list. Congrats to you. Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 12/20/2015 11:11:00 PM Thank you. Congratulations to you too. Regards. Shrineetee.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/20/2015 4:44:00 PM shrineetee, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 12/20/2015 11:10:00 PM Thank you for visiting this one and sending these wishes my way. Regards. Shrineetee.

Skat A Date: 12/20/2015 11:24:00 AM SHRINEETEE, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :) Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 12/20/2015 11:09:00 PM Thanks for encouraging words. Appreciate. Shrineetee.

Michael Whatley Date: 12/18/2015 6:37:00 AM Paints a pretty picture! Admirable alliteration in the last line too. Login to Reply Shrineetee Kar Date: 12/20/2015 3:09:00 AM Thanks, appreciate the comments. regards, Shrineetee.