Shrineetee Kar Poet Alliteration

Flowers

Blissfully unaware of the DANGER in the GARDEN
Flowers bloomed, blossomed and burgeoned the big way
But in vicinity of mankind, there is no leeway
Public in Park Picked, Plucked, Pulverizing Plethora of Petals.


18.12.2015



For 4 lines - Poetry Contest by  Silent One

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Skat A December 24, 2015 at 11:01 AM S.K, a pleasure to read :) have yourself A wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year....... SKAT LOVE Shrineetee Kar December 25, 2015 at 12:10 AM Thanks SKAT A. You too have a Merry Christmas and a Wonderful Year ahead. Regards. Shrineetee.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 2:00 AM Lovely write n win Shrineetee.. big congrats! Shrineetee Kar December 22, 2015 at 3:32 AM Thank you. Congratulations to you too. Regards. shrineetee.

Susan Gentry December 21, 2015 at 7:22 AM Congratulations on 2nd place win! I really enjoyed the last line especially. Great writing. Shrineetee Kar December 22, 2015 at 3:30 AM Thanks. Appreciate the good words. Regards. Shrineetee.

Paul Callus December 21, 2015 at 7:10 AM A lovely and clever entry, Shrineetee! Congratulations on a most worthy win. Regards *^* paul Shrineetee Kar December 22, 2015 at 3:27 AM Thanks for the sending the nice wishes my way. Regards. shrineetee.

John Lawless December 20, 2015 at 9:37 PM Congrats on your placement Shrineetee Shrineetee Kar December 20, 2015 at 11:11 PM Thanks for visiting this one and sending these wishes my way. Regards. shrineetee.

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 7:23 PM WELL DONE!!! I am glad to see this one high on the winner list. Congrats to you. Shrineetee Kar December 20, 2015 at 11:11 PM Thank you. Congratulations to you too. Regards. Shrineetee.

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 4:44 PM shrineetee, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Shrineetee Kar December 20, 2015 at 11:10 PM Thank you for visiting this one and sending these wishes my way. Regards. Shrineetee.

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:24 AM SHRINEETEE, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :) Shrineetee Kar December 20, 2015 at 11:09 PM Thanks for encouraging words. Appreciate. Shrineetee.

Michael Whatley December 18, 2015 at 6:37 AM Paints a pretty picture! Admirable alliteration in the last line too. Shrineetee Kar December 20, 2015 at 3:09 AM Thanks, appreciate the comments. regards, Shrineetee.