Notes About The Poem

Flowers

~Flowers~
 (Acrostic)


 R- esting so beautiful among the flower beds
 0- bject of man's devotions
 S- ending your message of beauty to all
 E- ndearing, among them you're the best

 I- n a colorful display your bearded face
 R- anting to the Sun, all day and night
 I- ntroverted you bow to the ground but
 S- till in your grace you kiss the Sun

 M- iracle dressed up in yellow,oranges
 A- dding to your presence more warmth
 R- adiating such a beauty under the Sun
 I- nviting within your petals light
 G- oing around in circles,endless
 O- bvious to my eyes,you're having fun
 L- ayers of softness,so ilusive you are
 D- ancing away under the magic of the Sun.


 Dorian Petersen Potter
 aka ladydp2000
 copyright@2015


June.14.2015



Authors notes:

From my flower poetry collection -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Wigley Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:08 AM
I love this time of year. Lovely Acrostic, Dorian. Viv x
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 1:54 AM
Thank you ever so kindly Viv,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D
Muideen Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 4:30 PM
Oh!!! This is extremely brilliant penned, the flower is beautiful and fascinating..........A.M.
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 2:51 AM
Thank you ever so kindly A.M,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:)D.
Flannery Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Where would we be without the beauty of flowers. Like the scent of a rose this poem reminds me of just how intricate His Creation is. Great write Dorian! God Bless.
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 3:01 AM
Thank you ever so kindly Vincent,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:)D.
A  Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 2:16 AM
WOW, THAT'S BREATHTAKING.. A PERFECT 7
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 2:50 AM
Thank you ever so kindly Skat for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem and for the 7.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) D.
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 5:33 PM
beautiful images and imagery - particularly love the line about the flowers dancing:-) hugs jan xx 7
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 2:49 AM
Thank you ever so kindly Jan for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem and for the 7.Much appreciate it dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs!D.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace