THIS IS A REWRITE IMPROVED AND INSPIRED BY THE "C'EST LA VIE" CHALLENGE
They had fought. He left without a word... ...while she was sleeping. She threw on the gown she had worn for him the night before, pushed off the china vase and blooms he had given her. She watched them fall in...s l o w...m o t i o n, listened to them crash to the floor... ...sat on the window sill, where the bouquet and container had been. She was alone but at least... ...she was the only flower. 22~10~2014 Sponsor: Judy Konos Contest Name: c'est la vie
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