Flowers

Let my soul be laid bare
in the open air,
and let lovely flowers grow there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 2/6/2022 6:27:00 AM
A beautiful picture you have sketched with so little words. Take care!
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Date: 1/26/2022 10:12:00 AM
I like this poem/ senryu from Line 1, & agree with Leotis & Angela. Shalom, shalom
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Date: 1/24/2022 11:20:00 AM
Very compelling. Love the idea of we all were bare at birth. Thanks for sharing.
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