Flowers 123

Rose
flower
sign of love
dark crimson red
stained with my blood from holding you to much
all flowers that will wither while you bloom. 
deep seductress
gardenia
scented
Sweet
Pick
daisy's
petals off
praying for love
picking petals, loves me she loves me not.



comp entry 08/07/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 9:31 AM
I really like this, Stephen. Congrats on your win.
Pennell  Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 9:35 AM
many thanks andrea always good to get the thumbs up from you x
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Whoo - Hoo ! Congratulations on your Triple Tetractys contest,Stephen , perfect form and wonderful poem. Hugs Eve
Pennell  Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 2:02 PM
Many thanks fantastic clear instructions as always always good to enter one of your comp x
Kimathi Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 6:40 AM
Hi Stephen. Congrats for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
Godwin Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 2:18 AM
I really like this! To me, this is very creative. Good luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
Pennell  Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 3:56 AM
many thanks CayCay good to try these new forms and eve's really good with explanations what she wants stephen x
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