Flower Power

summer scent of roses loosens grips of gloom
floral cups of red charm capture healing, 
                                            melt defenses

she inhales a held bouquet 
ensnared romantically, 
                 one couple's free fall to love
                 in a fragrance courting worship
                 its aroma of lushness

immodest crimson flames, born on long stems
she bypasses thorns, the cutting traces of pain
             cultivates blooms
             the crisp red blush of summer
             that soothes corrosive woe
to soften her restless sway, misgivings

what shimmers in a garden?
scents seductive
enticing her
stirringly brief
an atmospheric wonder
     as secrets slide away











For Brian Strand Contest 1097
Poem written - June 20/21
Revised March 26, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 9:36 PM
"an atmospheric wonder" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 7:10 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. Most kind of you to comment.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Hello Brian Sambourne, so nice to meet you. Flowers have the strength to storm the rain and to grow strong. to bloom with flowers bright colours. enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 10:36 AM
Hello Brian Sambourne, Hi, nice to meet you. I wish you well Brian. Sincerely Darlene. Enjoy your day.
Sambourne Avatar
June 26, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Hello Darlene, Thank you for your stop by. I appreciate your supportive note. Be well. Sincerely, Brian
Mcconnell Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 1:12 PM
Nice one Brian, showing the power of a flower. Take care, Gordon
Sambourne Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 3:09 PM
My appreciation, Gordon, for your thoughtful congratulations. Be well. Brian
Lamoureux Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 6:26 AM
To you as well Brian.
Sambourne Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 7:26 AM
So enjoyable to be vaccinated + de-masking. Take care. Brian
Alex Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 12:49 AM
Beautifully powerful and powerfully beautiful. Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 9:47 PM
Much appreciative of your thoughtful + supportive comment. Cheers, Brian
Lamoureux Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Powerful indeed.
Sambourne Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 8:44 AM
You are most thoughtful, Richard in posting messages. Health + happiness to you. Sincerely, Brian
Alex Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 10:47 AM
You have a very beautiful flowery language.
Sambourne Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 5:33 PM
Thank you Christuraj. I've enjoyed reading many of your submissions. Kind regards, Brian
Sands Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Nice one and great title. Definite flower power. Well done :)
Sambourne Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 2:08 PM
Hello Heidi, Thank you for reading my submission and leaving a comment. Best wishes, Brian
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