Flower Power

summer scent of roses loosens grips of gloom
floral cups of red charm capture healing, 
                                            melt defenses

she inhales a held bouquet 
ensnared romantically, 
                 one couple's free fall to love
                 in a fragrance courting worship
                 its aroma of lushness

immodest crimson flames, born on long stems
she bypasses thorns, the cutting traces of pain
             cultivates blooms
             the crisp red blush of summer
             that soothes corrosive woe
to soften her restless sway, misgivings

what shimmers in a garden?
scents seductive
enticing her
stirringly brief
an atmospheric wonder
     as secrets slide away











For Brian Strand Contest 1097
Poem written - June 20/21
Revised March 26, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/27/2022 9:36:00 PM
"an atmospheric wonder" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/28/2022 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. Most kind of you to comment.
Date: 6/26/2021 8:24:00 AM
Hello Brian Sambourne, so nice to meet you. Flowers have the strength to storm the rain and to grow strong. to bloom with flowers bright colours. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/26/2021 10:36:00 AM
Hello Brian Sambourne, Hi, nice to meet you. I wish you well Brian. Sincerely Darlene. Enjoy your day.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/26/2021 9:21:00 AM
Hello Darlene, Thank you for your stop by. I appreciate your supportive note. Be well. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 6/25/2021 1:12:00 PM
Nice one Brian, showing the power of a flower. Take care, Gordon
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/25/2021 3:09:00 PM
My appreciation, Gordon, for your thoughtful congratulations. Be well. Brian
Date: 6/24/2021 6:26:00 AM
To you as well Brian.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/24/2021 7:26:00 AM
So enjoyable to be vaccinated + de-masking. Take care. Brian
Date: 6/24/2021 12:49:00 AM
Beautifully powerful and powerfully beautiful. Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/24/2021 9:47:00 PM
Much appreciative of your thoughtful + supportive comment. Cheers, Brian
Date: 6/23/2021 6:55:00 AM
Powerful indeed.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/23/2021 8:44:00 AM
You are most thoughtful, Richard in posting messages. Health + happiness to you. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 6/21/2021 10:47:00 AM
You have a very beautiful flowery language.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/21/2021 5:33:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj. I've enjoyed reading many of your submissions. Kind regards, Brian
Date: 6/20/2021 12:52:00 PM
Nice one and great title. Definite flower power. Well done :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/20/2021 2:08:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Thank you for reading my submission and leaving a comment. Best wishes, Brian
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