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~9th Place~
Premiere Contest: Contest No. 219
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 10/07/2016

~3rd Place~
Contest: Screwed XI
Sponsor: Rob Carmack
Judged: 03/01/2016

Flower Or Weed


We seek out special flowers in the field,
That stand among the weeds in scarce array…
Quick pluck them from the thorns, a tiny yield,
Arrange them, stem by stem, for our display.
Then serving on a table, shelf, or sill,
Their fragrant beauty eases stress and strife,
While in the field, the crowded weeds will still
Meander on in wild pursuit of life.

The weeds grow dense and tangled in their clime,
Drink deep of soil and live for sun and rain,
While full, rich flowers, giving of their prime,
Will sooner wilt, their goodness spent for gain.

What's best to be—a carefree, rambling weed,
Or chosen flower, plucked to serve a need?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 12:40 PM
This speaks so much to life and how we live it. Wonderful Sandra. Congrats and Blessings.
Haight Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 1:51 PM
Thank you very much, Janis, for the congrats and supportive comment on my poem. I appreciate your visits and your encouraging remarks very much. Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 7:55 AM
I enjoyed these verses.... Congrats Sandra, for your well, deserved WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
Haight Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Hi Teddy, thank you for stopping by with your supportive comment and congrats! Sandra
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March 7, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Great win...pd
Haight Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Hi Linda, thank you again for your nice visits and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 9:50 PM
AH, Sandra what would we give for the beauty of the flower containing the tenacity of the weed.....OH....wait...we call them WOMEN.....Enjoyed this read immensely
Haight Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:19 AM
Thank you, John! Love your analogy! Sandra
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December 17, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Dear Sandra, I so enjoyed this poem. Thank you for creating it. I'm creating a book of my photography of New Zealand and would very much like to use your poem as part of my work. I found the wild flowers there stunning, and your poem would be a wonderful complement to them. I'm writing to ask permission to borrow your work and would be happy to show you what I'm thinking of if you like. My contact details: [email protected] Thank you for your consideration. Jon-Paul
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December 1, 2014 at 8:44 AM
A beautiful sonnet and one of my favorites in this contest, Sandra! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
Haight Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 9:42 PM
Hi Rhonda, thank you so much for your positive comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Kayode Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 12:02 AM
I love this Sandra , congrats on the win.
Haight Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 5:39 PM
Thank you so much, Kayod5! I appreciate your stopping by with your congratulations. Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 7:10 PM
There are many beautiful wild flowers out there. Beautifully written Sandra. Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 7:21 PM
Hi Brenda, thanks for your nice comment and congrats. As I already said, your poem was amazing! Hugs, Sandra
Yvonne Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 5:10 PM
Just stunning, Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 7:22 PM
Thanks, Maurice. So nice of you to stop by with your nice comment and congrats! Sandra
Stoner Jr Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 3:26 PM
congratulations on your win way to fine poem
Carmack Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Congrats Sandra, nice read.
Gibson Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:04 PM
Back again to read and congratulate this beautiful win.
Allison Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 11:35 AM
my husband describes a weed as a flower growing in the wrong place - great write - many congrats on your win Sandra:-) hugs jan xxx
Haight Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 5:38 PM
Hi Jan, yes, your hubby may be right! I believe the distinction was invented by humans! Thanks for stopping by with your congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Beautiful, Sandra! Some of the most lovely blooms grow wild and free...I predict a winner here. Hugs, Rhonda
Haight Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, thank you for your encouraging comment! Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 6:14 PM
You are so awesome. The perfect way to do this contest. I hope I can do as well as you have here!!!
Haight Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 11:01 AM
Andrea, I really appreciate your positive comment! I am quite sure you will create a gem! Thanks so much for stopping by. Sandra
Gibson Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 2:29 PM
This is lovely, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 11:01 AM
Thank you so much, Faye. Hugs, Sandra
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