Flower In the Rain

From your slumbering sleep you have risen
Gently as you open up your petals
You give smile to what the world has given
Sweet scent of yours can even melt the metals.

You arose like a gentle dawn
And you open up your eyes
Like a newest babe born
Tears trickling down as she cries

Displaying your alluring flowers
That can captivate the passers
No one and nobody is aware
That you truly and genuinely care.

Rainy season finally arrived
Your flowers tried to abide
Seeking care, comfort and affection
Only few who take the action.

Oh! How mere you are flower in the rain
How and when will you flower will reign
I do hope everything ends with a rainbow 
Where there is new hope, new life for tomorrow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 7:25 AM
That was amazing Stephany, very well written smooth and gentle and each word fit perfectly.
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January 3, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Oh hi Bobby!! Thank you so much for your kind comment. Somehow you then ignited me to write again. I'll visit your poems soon and read because I believe they're greatly written by you. Happy new year Bobby!!! Thanks for stopping by.. Kind regards, Stef :)
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January 22, 2017 at 6:57 AM
Enjoyed this little poem as well. I made comment before regarding some other writing that only a God could have truly created something as rigorously perfect and as mathematically flawless as a flowers petals...All flowers are truly beautiful! My best regards, Stephany. :) john P.s A seven.
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January 24, 2017 at 1:55 AM
oh yes. i read your comment and thank you for stopping by. thanks that you made an appreciation through it. I am greatly encouraged to write some. looking forward for your wonderful poems, John. :)
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