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Flower In the Rain

From your slumbering sleep you have risen Gently as you open up your petals You give smile to what the world has given Sweet scent of yours can even melt the metals. You arose like a gentle dawn And you open up your eyes Like a newest babe born Tears trickling down as she cries Displaying your alluring flowers That can captivate the passers No one and nobody is aware That you truly and genuinely care. Rainy season finally arrived Your flowers tried to abide Seeking care, comfort and affection Only few who take the action. Oh! How mere you are flower in the rain How and when will you flower will reign I do hope everything ends with a rainbow Where there is new hope, new life for tomorrow.

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Bobby May

Date: 12/30/2018 7:25:00 AM

That was amazing Stephany, very well written smooth and gentle and each word fit perfectly.

Ruth Wrights
Date: 1/3/2019 7:08:00 AM

Oh hi Bobby!! Thank you so much for your kind comment. Somehow you then ignited me to write again. I'll visit your poems soon and read because I believe they're greatly written by you. Happy new year Bobby!!! Thanks for stopping by.. Kind regards, Stef :)

John Fleming

Date: 1/22/2017 6:57:00 AM

Enjoyed this little poem as well. I made comment before regarding some other writing that only a God could have truly created something as rigorously perfect and as mathematically flawless as a flowers petals...All flowers are truly beautiful! My best regards, Stephany. :) john P.s A seven.

Ruth Wrights
Date: 1/24/2017 1:55:00 AM

oh yes. i read your comment and thank you for stopping by. thanks that you made an appreciation through it. I am greatly encouraged to write some. looking forward for your wonderful poems, John. :)