Flower In Rapture-A Haiku

flower in rapture
                                            olfactory perception
                                              bee is near petal
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Fraser Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 1:51 PM
Love seeing such in gardens and parks :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 6:49 PM
A lovely vision Rajat. I haven't seen you around much my friend. I hope you are well. Blessings for the new year! : ) xxoo
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July 27, 2018 at 5:25 PM
I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery, Rajat. I hope you and your family are doing well. Hugs Eve
Callus Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 2:26 AM
A pleasurable moment of anticipation, Rajat! Lovely! Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 3:24 PM
very nice, Rajat.
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July 2, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Nice one, Rajat :)
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July 2, 2018 at 2:05 PM
Lovely haiku, my friend! A flower expectantly awaits the arrival of a bee! What a vivid imagery you paint with your talented pen! Best regards. Pandita
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