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Flower Girl

In 1912 she sits in lane
On cobblestone in fog and rain

Buy a posy of violet hue
Lavender flowers with morning dew

Pinkest roses from my "barrow"
From gardens sweet in Health and Harrow

Take pity on a maid like me
So I may go and taste some tea

The morning mists do chill my soul
And I'm almost out of coal

I sleep each night in pauper's bed
As dreams of a saviour fill my head

To lead me up to a garden of flowers
Where I may rest and pass the hours

Far away from London's social tripe
And those who call me "guttersnipe"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/4/2008 11:36:00 AM
Ah! ...a period piece! Lovely rhyming couplets and sweet cadence. You have a true poetic sensibility... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 10/14/2008 9:41:00 AM
Aww, that's actually really unique- which does NOT describe most of the poems on here. Great job! I give it a 9
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:47:00 AM
The imagery you create reminds me of Shaw's Eliza Doolittle, only with more of an inspirational feel to it. Excellent flow and rhyme. Michael
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