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Flower and Butterfly

o tender flower can I be a butterfly? of course on one condition o enchanting fly will you kiss me tenderly? I promise i'll be gentle 16.07.2021 For William Kekaula, Ni (2) Katuata Syllables checked at PS

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Date: 7/18/2021 5:43:00 PM
delicate and dainty, great imagery.
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Date: 7/16/2021 3:20:00 PM
very sweet Haiku, Rama, I really love it! Flower and butterfly - perfect pair! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 7/16/2021 7:27:00 AM
Certainly got a summer feel to it Rama, love to see them in the garden. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 7/16/2021 6:06:00 AM
Nice imagery in this great Haiku, Rama, my very best wishes for the contest.
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