Rama Balasubramanian Poet Haiku

Flower and Butterfly

o tender flower
can I be a butterfly?
of course on one condition

o enchanting fly 
will you kiss me tenderly?
I promise i'll be gentle


16.07.2021

 For William Kekaula,	Ni (2) Katuata
Syllables checked at PS

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Caren Krutsinger July 18, 2021 at 5:43 PM delicate and dainty, great imagery.

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 16, 2021 at 3:20 PM very sweet Haiku, Rama, I really love it! Flower and butterfly - perfect pair! BW ~ Mala

Tom Cunningham July 16, 2021 at 7:27 AM Certainly got a summer feel to it Rama, love to see them in the garden. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Sotto Poet July 16, 2021 at 6:06 AM Nice imagery in this great Haiku, Rama, my very best wishes for the contest.