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Flow of Rapture Collaboration With Probir Gupta

Flow of Rapture Collaboration with Probir Gupta Cascading along the coveted curves The flow of rapture proceeds in joy Sometimes halting and softly fondling Green grass turns pink for a while The air filled with tickled laughter Ventures through labyrinth fields As sun filters through the vast canopy Of leaves bathed a golden hue. Wet pure and crystal flows, With erratic beating of its heart Plummet down with wild booming roar Sending shivers racing down the covert on the banks Warm breath assaults the stony resolve Warm touches loosen the rocky rigidity Moving ahead raising a honey tremor A green and black swirl in the crazy head From head to toe a tumbling twist In each bend thick bushes of delight The coursing on brings out in its wake Purple orange and yellow stanzas Under an orange kissed sky Nature's essence, of harmony and rhythm A soul of perfection beneath shadowed shade and sigh The flow of rapture proceeds in joy 7/11/201
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Nusker Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Now this is what I call beauty at its height. Marvelous poem. My best regards to both of you.
White Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 3:24 AM
Oh, I only see this now. This is very beautiful. I love the last stanza. Fantastic collaboration.
Daniel Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Another lovely collaboration, Eve and Probir:) this is exhilarating:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 2:33 AM
This is such a glorious collaboration. You work so well together as evidenced by this wonderful flowing piece! Bravo! : )
Sands Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 3:48 PM
Stunningly beautiful lines. Both of you did very well with this. A joy to read :)
Turner Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 3:02 PM
This is one "sweet" write! Just beautiful, so romantic:) You two make wonderful sparring partners. A most enjoyable read Mrs Eve and Probir. One of the very best collabs i have read!
Trifiatis Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Nature as the Lord has created is now recreated in all its glory with this superb collaboration of two of my favored poets, Eve and my dear friend, Probir! A fav for me! Good luck my friends!
Green Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 12:50 PM
This was vibrantly wonderful. So filled with beauty and soothing stanzas of solitude. You have brought nature glistening to us with your fine poetic collaboration. Bravo to you Eve and Probir. An incredible piece of writing.
Andresen Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 12:24 PM
- A delightful poem, filled with beauty and joy - Beautiful painting of nature - Really a pleasure to read, Eve and Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Thank you, Sunshine, I am so glad Probir help me write this wonderful poem. ~*
Gupta Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 12:22 PM
Now that the collaboration is posted, I find myself honoured ... The rest the readers will say ...
Roper Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 12:33 PM
Awe, thank you, Probir, it is a beautiful poem an was an honor write it with you my friend ~*
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