Flow Casual

A swirl of color,
that spoon's stirring casual.
Tidal rotation,
moon drunk on a tie-dyed sky.
Easygoing, just flow slow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 5:47 PM
I love the imagery in your poem! Tankas are my favorite form and you did this one perfectly!
Udaeta Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 9:36 PM
Thank you so much. Blessings.
Hind Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 7:31 PM
I actually really like this! A fav :)
Udaeta Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 6:29 AM
Thank you. Blessings.
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