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long and scrawny legs no shorts struts though the water feathers stay completely dry hidden in tall grass little fish swims between legs reason to get wet swallows fish in single gulp strikes a perfect pose ladies he awaits March 12, 2015 For Rhonda's Florida Nature Contest.

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Date: 3/21/2015 8:40:00 AM
Wonderful haikus..they strike a perfect chord!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/21/2015 9:06:00 AM
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Date: 3/16/2015 2:21:00 PM
Haha.I enjoyed your string of haiku..: ). You are really good at these ku : )
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Date: 3/14/2015 2:15:00 PM
Nice triple Haiku, Richard! You painted the picture well with your select words. GL in the contest. Sandra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2015 2:34:00 PM
Thanks Sandra.
Date: 3/13/2015 9:34:00 AM
A lovely string of haiku, Richard. Very 'natural'! I take it we're talking about a heron here. #7 // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2015 9:38:00 AM
Ha ha, both yes and no!
Date: 3/13/2015 9:05:00 AM
I like it alot!! "strikes a perfect pose ladies he awaits", my favorite. Richard, i Wish you the best
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2015 9:33:00 AM
Thanks again Njeri.
Date: 3/12/2015 10:47:00 PM
Dave is right, it is heaven when he has everything he wants in front of him. Wonderful write a 7 dear friend and good luck in the contest
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2015 8:09:00 AM
Thanks for the seven and the luck.
Date: 3/12/2015 1:36:00 PM
Great haikus. Good luck in the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2015 8:07:00 AM
Hi Armand, nice to see you back.
Date: 3/12/2015 11:02:00 AM
What a reflection of nature on verse! Absolutely captivating my friend, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2015 12:33:00 PM
I had fun with this one Demetrious.
Date: 3/12/2015 10:26:00 AM
Majestic ending! Light-hearted yet perfectly true, this food chain. Blessings for the contest, Richard, :) Kim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2015 10:35:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/12/2015 10:19:00 AM
A delightful collection of haikus that each paint a little picture about life , in its own fashion. Well thought out, with some great thoughts and subtle emotions emerging from the words. Emile. #7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2015 10:36:00 AM
Good morning and thanks my friend.
Date: 3/12/2015 9:50:00 AM
Wonderful written haikus! Love the ending ladies he awaits. Good luck in the contest.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Tammy.;0)
Date: 3/12/2015 9:46:00 AM
- Beautiful haikus .... Reason to reading :)) - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2015 10:07:00 AM
Thanks and hugs back to you.
Date: 3/12/2015 9:27:00 AM
Richard, love these double haikus, wonderfully written for the contest, I chose the same visual, there was something truly majestic in that pose, best of luck and thanks for your thoughtful comments on my poetry . . .
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2015 9:38:00 AM
Thanks, I have added a third. I'm pleased you enjoyed!
Date: 3/12/2015 9:09:00 AM
I love this haiku, Richard. It is really imaginative. Hugs, Kimberly
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Kimberly.
Date: 3/12/2015 9:08:00 AM
Nice! I love it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2015 10:06:00 AM
Hi Casarah it is now completed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Casarah.