Laura Leiser Poet Tanka

Florida Nature

Florida back roads
                                orchards with horses grazing
                                      lead to Joe's Corner
                                   tastiest oranges around
                                 in the heart of the farmland 











Written on 3/5/2015

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Sandra Haight March 8, 2015 at 8:51 AM Laura, your Tanka flows so smoothly and centers on one important and valued gift that Florida offers us. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Emile Pinet March 6, 2015 at 9:16 AM This is a hauntingly beautiful poem that poetically draws on the allure of Florida's laid back life style. Emile. #7 Laura Leiser March 6, 2015 at 10:06 AM Why, thank you, Emile! I appreciate your kind supportive comments, as usual! :)

Jack Ellison March 6, 2015 at 7:21 AM I miss Florida terribly! Spend many many vacations there! Much luck! Huggs, Jack xx Laura Leiser March 6, 2015 at 10:07 AM I've actually never been to Florida, Jack, but I'd like to if I have the opportunity someday. Thanks for your kind comments :)

Laura Leiser March 5, 2015 at 11:57 PM Thanks, Jan! its so short, I don't think it stands a chance, but I entered it anyway...what the hey! ;) Jan Allison March 6, 2015 at 3:46 AM I started mine and that's as far as I got lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison March 5, 2015 at 11:17 PM Very descriptive tanka - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Laura Leiser March 5, 2015 at 11:59 PM Thanks, Jan! It doesn't stand a chance, but I entered it anyway ;)