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Florida Holiday

Flew out with family to Florida for the parks and the beacH
Landed at Sanford airport in OrlandO
Once we'd unpacked we had a dip in the pooL
Rose early next morning and we were ready for our taxI
In the parks with the tropical heat we kept well hydrateD
Drank lots of cold coke and ice cream sodA
After two weeks our holiday ended, but we vowed to return one daY.




Written 1st June 2020

For Double Double Words To Bubble Poetry Contest .

Sponsored By Joseph May.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Brown  Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 10:14 PM
I have happy memories of family holidays to Florida! Congratulations Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 4:51 AM
Thank you Lisa, without doubt it's a magical place. Tom
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June 6, 2020 at 10:46 AM
I went to Florida on my honeymoon - glad you have so many happy memories, congratulations on your win in the contest!
Cunningham Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 12:21 PM
Thanks for the congrats Michelle, it's an awesome place I never get tired of going, hopefully next year, that's if that virus decides to take a hike. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Sounds like a wonderful Holiday Tom, we have never been to America but I would like to one day, Elias not so much. Blessings Tom, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 10:52 AM
Thank you Jennifer, been a few times now, always had a lovely time, been to the other side once to California. Tom
Mishra Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 4:24 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Tom :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 5:01 AM
Thank you very much Aditi, I found composing a double acrostic quite a challenge. Hope you're well Tom
Watt Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 6:04 PM
Nicely done Tom, with a bit of your family history preserved poetically. Hope you get back there some day. I've still never been to Florida. Congrats on the win ~ John
Cunningham Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 8:01 PM
Thank you John, we really enjoyed it, would love to go back before I'm too old to enjoy the rides. Tom
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 4:34 PM
Congratulations on your win Tom. I did mine wrong so did not post it. They are a challenge and you did well! Blessings xxoo
Cunningham Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Thank you Connie, I'll admit it wasn't easy to do. Tom
Warrior Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 8:03 AM
Great acrostic retreat Tommy...don't know about now though...great entry my friend...^WW^ :o)
Cunningham Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 10:11 AM
Thank you W. W., planning to go in the next couple of years, hopefully things will have calmed down and the virus will be just a memory. Hope you're well Tom
May Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Sounds like a great vacation Tom, Congrats on your win
Cunningham Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 10:03 AM
Thank you Joseph, my first acrostic, doubles are challenging for sure. Thank you too for hosting. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 5:07 AM
You brought to mind the many visits I had to Florida including Orlado. Hope you had as a good time I had my friend, Tom. Greece is waiting for you. Are you coming? Blessings!
Trifiatis Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 8:20 AM
The latest news is that Greece has opened its doors to tourism from the UK. I hope the UK will let its people come!
Cunningham Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 5:13 AM
Thank you Demetrios, we did have a great time, would love to go to Greece but not sure if anyone from the UK will be allowed in with our high death rate and poor handling of the crisis. Tom
Chutani Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 12:41 AM
Makes me yearn to come to Florida with your travelogue, so sweetly done for double acrostic. Congrats. Mohan
Cunningham Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 4:34 AM
Thank you Mohan, it's a wonderful place, first attempt at an acrostic too. Tom
Onclaud Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 4:46 PM
i miss traveking and this wonderful write brings back sweet memories... i had fuun too in florida!... huggs
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 4:49 PM
Thank you Nette, not looking good for 2020, if things improve later in the year we'll be off Tom
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June 2, 2020 at 3:16 AM
I so much enjoyed the read and liked your creativity! A long story with Acrostic poems at school! I missed writing them! Thank you so much Tom for inspiring beautifully your readers! My deepest regards and blessings.
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 3:42 AM
Thank you very much Besma, I'm happy you enjoyed my verse. My first attempt at an acrostic. Hope you're well Tom
Vangaveti Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 3:08 AM
Great poem!! Enjoyed it!!
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 3:41 AM
Thank you Swetha, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Mishra Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 12:25 AM
Lovely memories of a beautiful holiday. I hope you return one day with your loved ones to Florida Tom. Best wishes. God bless you :)
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 3:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi, we hired a house the last time we went with its own pool, an amazing place. Tom
Messina Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 10:11 PM
Hope you had a nice vacation, Tom. Well done! Good luck in the contest. Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 2:59 AM
Thanks Charlie, been about five times now, can't wait for our next trip. Hope you're OK Tom
Mcintosh Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 7:46 PM
Great poem, Tom. I enjoyed it and am sure it will be a winner - Bless you, dear friend, Gina
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 2:57 AM
Thank you Regina, I'm happy you liked it. Hope you're well Tom
Romios Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 7:30 PM
Tom! Good show! I knew you could do this one. A double is a lot harder. But all poetry requires thought and planning. Even single acrostics. Haikus, Senryus are relatively easy. So are footies for heavens sake compared to the Poetry of Lindley!-)) Nonetheless, all take time, for me. Wishing you a first place. Florida is wonderful.... Panagiota xoxo
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 2:57 AM
Thanks Panagiota, it was challenging doing a double, but never gave up. Tom
Wolf Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 6:21 PM
I'm all admiration for you and for anyone else who does these 'double bubbles.' I can't. My problem perhaps is that I can't write poetry and chew gum at the same time. ~ Typical Male
Cunningham Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 6:26 PM
Thanks Gershon, acrostics are not hard but doing a double is a lot trickier, my first attempt at one. We're not multi taskers like our good ladies lol. Tom
Pandit Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 5:24 PM
A fantastic place for parks and beaches--Florida is! Your double double words creatively tell the story, Tom. Looks so hard to execute! Well done for a win!
Cunningham Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 5:30 PM
Thank you Vijay, have been about five times now and never get tired of it. Panagiota said to have a go as I'd never written one, yes double ones are trickier I must admit. Hope all is well with you Tom
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