Florida

you should come down to florida
this time of the year.

i miss you so much,
baby, i wish you were here

so i could drown you
in the rain,
the ocean,
and my tears.

i'm in paradise,
and you got what you prayed for
last year in the southwestern hemisphere.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 15, 2016 at 1:31 PM
I like it Carlyn Rose...Truly I do. Lol! Sounds like he got what he deserved. A solid, compact little poem - A seven! My best regards. :) john
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