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Floral Farewell

Velvet red roses stand
cheek to cheek
with daisy faces, ringed
in petal fringes,
sweetly scented
by creamy bubbles 
of double jonquil popcorn blooms
beside a starburst
yellow chrysanthemum,
and long leaves 
squeezed between.
Below, their stem-straws blur
in the ribbed glass jar,
looped with a satin orange bow 
for your 97 years
we must farewell soon.

The loved ones are visiting,
bringing flowers, hugs, reminiscences
for you, last of your generation -
two brothers, two sisters.

I don't want to say, 'Goodbye'.
Let's have a few more days, 
or weeks, or months,
just for keeping company,
like the flower bunch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 5:39 AM
A poignant write! Flowers in a vase bidding goodbye, soon saying hello to grief, but begging more time, to keep company. A fave. It stirs my tears. hugs…
Swan Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 2:25 PM
Thanks Kim, We are having those few months (with lots of sleeping, but still precious). J
Empress Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Farewells are never easy: iv had three funerals this year, one just a week ago. And altho i know they are going to a better place, it just is painful and sad. Youv written very well a fragrant farewell in such a poignant and poetic manner. Sending you light always
Swan Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 5:21 AM
Thanks for your kind thoughts. The world changes when loved ones leave. I always want to leave cut flowers until they drop because they still have beauty at the end. I will miss this dear lady. J
Puddifoot Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 5:09 AM
poignant but beautifully written..thanks for commenting on my poetry
Swan Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 5:28 AM
Thank you for your kind words, appreciated. J :)
Challender Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 12:15 AM
A good one Jeanette. Great title and imagery, powerful ending.
Swan Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 1:52 AM
Thanks Martin for your kind words. J :)
Swan Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 2:25 PM
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Swan Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 2:27 PM
It is sad. My mother-in-law has pancreatic cancer and is fading ( not yet bed-ridden), I love her. Thanks for your comments. J x
Kendrick Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 12:59 PM
Ahh!! Sad one. I am not sure if it is the death of this person or if they are on their death bed or if a birthday. It is sad to say our farewells to someone we love. My mother and father both lived to be almost 97 just short by 2 weeks and mother 1 month shy. Sara K
Swan Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 2:36 PM
is sad. My mother-in-law has pancreatic cancer and is fading ( not yet bed-ridden), I love her. Thanks for your comments. J x
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