Flora

A crown of flowers, Adorns the lovely maiden; The goddess of Spring.

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Daniel Neal

Date: 2/11/2009 2:45:00 PM

I read up on Flora and this is a great haiku. DN

Arany P.

Date: 2/11/2009 3:21:00 AM

words of spring... Raul! beauty this is! ~ Arany

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/3/2009 3:11:00 AM

Outstanding work, your haiku's are nice to read. I enjoy them. Tyler

Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/3/2009 2:51:00 AM

You knowledge is amazing of how you write about so many nice and lovely things, you're amazing.................Danielle

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/2/2009 5:29:00 PM

A lovely Maiden she is..............nice haiku

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/2/2009 5:58:00 AM

You really do write lovely Haikus, Raul. This paints such a beautiful picture of the coming spring! Nice work, my friend. Love, Robin

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/1/2009 10:02:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, I've read about Flora the Goddess of Spring, nice tribute to her. Love Elizabeth

Sue Mason

Date: 2/1/2009 2:54:00 PM

Beautifully done, Raul. Hope you've entered this in the Spring contest ... its a winner ... smile ...

Date: 2/1/2009 11:25:00 AM

Beautiful spring poem capturing the essence of the season in just three lines. I can't wait for the flowers and green grass. Since we have quite a bit of snow, it'll be awhile. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/1/2009 8:38:00 AM

The visual is lovely! ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/1/2009 7:35:00 AM

Another wonderful piece of writing from you Raul..Beauty living in those words. Chris.

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/1/2009 6:40:00 AM

A breathtaking visual as your words make our imagination soar. Nicely done! Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/1/2009 4:03:00 AM

beautiful haiku, Raul, indeed. love, Kristin

Christy Hardy

Date: 2/1/2009 3:58:00 AM

I can see her coming through a field, her hair blowing in the wind, barefoot welcoming spring....I loved this, always, Christy

Brian Strand

Date: 2/1/2009 12:30:00 AM

Picturesque words Raul.Rgds Brian

Steve Edmonds

Date: 2/1/2009 12:21:00 AM

Nice research Raul on this great haiku. Your creativity is vast.

John Heck

Date: 1/31/2009 10:07:00 PM

Simplistic and lovely. Raul. I don't know...maybe it's me but...when I read outside of my poetic box/realm and read you; I smile and feel good. Guess that sums it up. Lovely. Have a wonderful weekend. Peace always, John