Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Floor Tin Makes Music

Low sound like drum beat
                                          rain falls out side home non stop
                                                   floor tin makes  music

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Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2012 at 4:55 AM This is really nice, BL. It really does sound like a type of music too!! I can imagine it. Bl Devnath September 4, 2012 at 8:25 AM Nice one gives always nice comment. You are always nice. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud August 26, 2012 at 9:19 AM love the tonality and beat of this work, bl..much enjoyed!.. wow,,:) huggs! Bl Devnath August 26, 2012 at 9:34 AM Thanks for reviewing my write and for your comment, bl

Robert Pettit August 25, 2012 at 11:21 PM It must sound like island music. Good descriptive haiku. Bl Devnath August 26, 2012 at 9:35 AM Thanks for reviewing my write and for your comment, bl