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Floor Tin Makes Music

Low sound like drum beat rain falls out side home non stop floor tin makes music

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2012 4:55:00 AM

This is really nice, BL. It really does sound like a type of music too!! I can imagine it.

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/4/2012 8:25:00 AM

Nice one gives always nice comment. You are always nice. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/26/2012 9:19:00 AM

love the tonality and beat of this work, bl..much enjoyed!.. wow,,:) huggs!

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/26/2012 9:34:00 AM

Thanks for reviewing my write and for your comment, bl

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/25/2012 11:21:00 PM

It must sound like island music. Good descriptive haiku.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/26/2012 9:35:00 AM

Thanks for reviewing my write and for your comment, bl