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Floop Goop Suprise

Kanoodle the poodle, eats blue beans and noodles. With sticky grey peas, while he swings in a tree. A brown fish on toast, a pink bubblegum roast. On crackers with cheese, whilst dancing with fleas. Red floop juice and blue goop, makes a purple floop soup. white fish eyes and black flies, we've made a floop goop suprise. as the floop goop cools off, he starts licking his chops. He feasts by a tree then falls fast asleep ZzZzZzzzzzzzzzzz.... Contest: Dr seuss on the loose Copyright (c) 2012 James Mahauariki

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Date: 2/12/2012 3:08:00 AM
JAMES,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:01:00 PM
The 4 judges arm wrestled over this one for 2nd place..I tell u, this was a hard competition to judge and the competition was rough. I am so excited about this creation of yours and for your first entry into one of my contests..James, you are a very strong poet and I will enjoy reading your list here in the very near future. Oh, the fav line of mine in this poem, and the one that sold me as a BIG KID--pink bubblegum roast!! U took the imagination to an all time high with this line! Again, congrats..Gwendolen Rix
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James Mahauariki
Date: 2/8/2012 6:34:00 PM
thanx so much, i was pretty chuffed to get a place at all!!! i look forward to entering more of your interesting to say the least comps in the near future!
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:01:00 PM
purple floop goop....mmmm yummy dessert too!!
Date: 2/7/2012 1:58:00 PM
Good picture poem. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Mike
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Gwen's "Dr. Seuss" contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 1:20:00 AM
Congratulations James a worthy wn x
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:06:00 PM
To muj bro...
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Date: 2/6/2012 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's contest. This is out of the ordinary and very entertaining.
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Date: 2/2/2012 10:46:00 AM
Rhyme brother, And welcome to the soup... if you like em you be posting every day..
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Date: 2/2/2012 2:28:00 AM
Amusing, I can read your poetry all day! Love It!
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