Floop Goop Suprise

Kanoodle the poodle,
eats blue beans and noodles.
With sticky grey peas,
while he swings in a tree.

A brown fish on toast,
a pink bubblegum roast.
On crackers with cheese,
whilst dancing with fleas.

Red floop juice and blue goop,
makes a purple floop soup.
white fish eyes and black flies,
we've made a floop goop suprise.

as the floop goop cools off,
he starts licking his chops.
He feasts by a tree
then falls fast asleep

ZzZzZzzzzzzzzzzz....


Contest: Dr seuss on the loose
Copyright (c) 2012
James Mahauariki
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 12, 2012 at 3:08 AM
JAMES,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
Song Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:01 PM
The 4 judges arm wrestled over this one for 2nd place..I tell u, this was a hard competition to judge and the competition was rough. I am so excited about this creation of yours and for your first entry into one of my contests..James, you are a very strong poet and I will enjoy reading your list here in the very near future. Oh, the fav line of mine in this poem, and the one that sold me as a BIG KID--pink bubblegum roast!! U took the imagination to an all time high with this line! Again, congrats..Gwendolen Rix
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February 8, 2012 at 6:34 PM
thanx so much, i was pretty chuffed to get a place at all!!! i look forward to entering more of your interesting to say the least comps in the near future!
Song Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:01 PM
purple floop goop....mmmm yummy dessert too!!
Dailey Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:58 PM
Good picture poem. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Mike
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 11:18 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Gwen's "Dr. Seuss" contest James. Love, Carol
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February 7, 2012 at 1:20 AM
Congratulations James a worthy wn x
Mahauariki Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 8:06 PM
To muj bro...
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February 6, 2012 at 2:40 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's contest. This is out of the ordinary and very entertaining.
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February 2, 2012 at 10:46 AM
Rhyme brother, And welcome to the soup... if you like em you be posting every day..
Dennis Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 2:28 AM
Amusing, I can read your poetry all day! Love It!
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