Flock of Geese

a flock of geese honks flying in blue skies above slow busy traffic Heidi Sands 9/17/24 (C)opyright

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/28/2024 10:00:00 AM

Heidi, with grace and eloquence you have written a picture of the serenity of flying geese as they soar through the skies. Just lovely. Blessings!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2024 10:09:00 AM

Thank you very much Sam :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/17/2024 7:55:00 PM

The original 'gaper's block!' :) Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/18/2024 5:19:00 AM

Lol . Thank you Gershon :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/17/2024 3:09:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I always watch the geese fly bye in the sky. I enjoy to hear their honking song. In the sky they look so small. On the ground they are huge. enjoy your evening Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/18/2024 12:09:00 PM

Hello Heidi, yes to watch the geese flying a v-formation is a lovely sight. i enjoy to watch them and listen to their honking song. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/18/2024 5:19:00 AM

It was a nice sight. Thank you Darlene :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/17/2024 12:07:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun write. Need to stop when animals are in the road. Guess they have the right of way. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away................

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/17/2024 12:31:00 PM

Yes, they have the right of way Paula lol. Thank you. I hope you have a fun day too :)

Tom Woody

Date: 9/17/2024 5:45:00 AM

Good, that means some are slowing down to take in the wonderful sight above them. Nice haiku Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/17/2024 6:08:00 AM

Thank you Tom. I appreciate your comment :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/17/2024 5:35:00 AM

Very elegant and imaginative.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/17/2024 5:38:00 AM

Thank you Victor. I actually saw this sight this morning and it inspired this. I hope you have a nice day :)