Flock of Geese



                a flock of geese honks
              flying in blue skies above
                       slow busy traffic



Heidi Sands

9/17/24

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Kauffman Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Heidi, with grace and eloquence you have written a picture of the serenity of flying geese as they soar through the skies. Just lovely. Blessings!
Sands Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 10:09 AM
Thank you very much Sam :)
Wolf Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 7:55 PM
The original 'gaper's block!' :) Gershon
Sands Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 5:19 AM
Lol . Thank you Gershon :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 3:09 PM
Hello Heidi, I always watch the geese fly bye in the sky. I enjoy to hear their honking song. In the sky they look so small. On the ground they are huge. enjoy your evening Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 12:09 PM
Hello Heidi, yes to watch the geese flying a v-formation is a lovely sight. i enjoy to watch them and listen to their honking song. Hugs. /Darlene/
Sands Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 5:19 AM
It was a nice sight. Thank you Darlene :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 12:07 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Need to stop when animals are in the road. Guess they have the right of way. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away................
Sands Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Yes, they have the right of way Paula lol. Thank you. I hope you have a fun day too :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 5:35 AM
Very elegant and imaginative.
Sands Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Thank you Victor. I actually saw this sight this morning and it inspired this. I hope you have a nice day :)
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