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Floating Thoughts

Stories have a habit just to shift That little bit to rearrange themselves Subtly with each addition I sketched a moment And I picture it, finding a place For the imagined image And placed it with the ones I already possessed, entwining Images with reality and the imagined Till both are woven forming Kalidoscopic patterns Is real the imagined? Or imagined the reality? Allowing depth to the picture I paused to let a forgotten detail emerge Surprising myself with the surfaced image! Moments you approach and retreat from Or just get stuck on, yet time passes And then you suddenly snap out of a thought To sink into another, swirling slowly Till you digest it or spit it out Like a bad taste that keeps surfacing But I swallow it for better or worse And carry on adding to my story Entwined with all of the other stories A part of it and yet alone My thoughts now my home! 14.6.22

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Date: 6/14/2022 12:50:00 PM
The process of writing and editing perfectly articulated Carol. I really resonated with your piece. Many thanks for sharing.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/14/2022 6:52:00 PM
Thank you dear Sam for appreciating it :)

Book: Shattered Sighs