Floating Thoughts

Stories have a habit just to shift
That little bit to rearrange themselves
Subtly with each addition
I sketched a moment
And I picture it, finding a place
For the imagined image
And placed it with the ones
I already possessed, entwining 
Images with reality and the imagined
Till both are woven forming 
Kalidoscopic patterns
Is real the imagined? 
Or imagined the reality?
Allowing depth to the picture
I paused to let a forgotten detail emerge
Surprising myself with the surfaced image!
Moments you approach and retreat from
Or just get stuck on, yet time passes
And then you suddenly snap out of a thought
To sink into another, swirling slowly
Till you digest it or spit it out
Like a bad taste that keeps surfacing
But I swallow it for better or worse
And carry on adding to my story
Entwined with all of the other stories
A part of it and yet alone
My thoughts now my home!

14.6.22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:50 PM
The process of writing and editing perfectly articulated Carol. I really resonated with your piece. Many thanks for sharing.
Mitra Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 6:52 PM
Thank you dear Sam for appreciating it :)
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