Floating On a Breath

The Dandelion Exhale and the seeds take flight Pretty little weed

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James Fraser

Date: 1/10/2011 3:27:00 PM

Sharon, the Dandelion's get such a bad name as a weed. The rich yellow that they have is absolutely beautiful. They have my vote. Lovely Haiku....:)

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 1/4/2011 2:46:00 PM

Oh Shar terrific haiku.Thanks so much for your very kind comment.~LUV~Teresa

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/4/2011 5:35:00 AM

I love it Sharon. Made me smile this morning before going to work....and THAT takes some doing! "pretty little weed" love it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2011 12:18:00 AM

I like this. I like dandelions too!

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/1/2011 10:50:00 AM

Beautiful, I can see all the seeds spreading into the sky and becoming new little weeds

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/1/2011 9:50:00 AM

Lovely Shar!!!! beautiful image you paint.. hope your New Year is a great one filled with joy and happiness...love Michael