Floating On a Breath

The Dandelion

Exhale and the seeds take flight

Pretty little weed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 3:27 PM
Sharon, the Dandelion's get such a bad name as a weed. The rich yellow that they have is absolutely beautiful. They have my vote. Lovely Haiku....:)
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January 4, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Oh Shar terrific haiku.Thanks so much for your very kind comment.~LUV~Teresa
Dufresne Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 5:35 AM
I love it Sharon. Made me smile this morning before going to work....and THAT takes some doing! "pretty little weed" love it.
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 12:18 AM
I like this. I like dandelions too!
Laan Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Beautiful, I can see all the seeds spreading into the sky and becoming new little weeds
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January 1, 2011 at 9:50 AM
Lovely Shar!!!! beautiful image you paint.. hope your New Year is a great one filled with joy and happiness...love Michael
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