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Floating Melodies

summer's dulcet song
 rises with dawn then softly...
 drifts on twilight's glow

 5-24-19
 Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku Contest
 Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2019 2:25:00 PM

"Tis enjoyable the summer song just not the heat. Thanks for the visit to my blog. Sara

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/7/2019 1:58:00 AM

Delightful and fantastic poem! -JWE

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2019 12:44:00 PM

This one drifts along just perfectly for me...Congrats on a well-deserved win with this calming, restful haiku. :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/8/2019 2:01:00 AM

Congratulations Joseph on your win - a wonderful write an serene haiku - well done. Hugs, Jennifer.

Charles Messina

Date: 6/6/2019 11:19:00 PM

This is a great haiku, Joseph. Best wishes for a win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2019 10:16:00 PM

A long beautiful Summer day!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/6/2019 8:44:00 AM

Very nice. I love the title too. Congratulations :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/30/2019 1:11:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph, on this win. This is a beautiful melody indeed. :) Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2019 9:59:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 5/27/2019 9:55:00 AM

Joseph congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku!

Joseph May
Date: 5/27/2019 12:04:00 PM

Thank you for my placement DH....

Silent One

Date: 5/27/2019 9:55:00 AM

Sounds lovely... Sweet haiku

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/26/2019 7:19:00 PM

Congratulations, Joseph!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/26/2019 6:14:00 PM

So beautifully penned

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2019 3:13:00 PM

this poem is lovely like a melody. Congrats on the list. I really enjoyed this one, Joseph.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2019 2:08:00 PM

- A lovely picture, Joseph :) - Congratulations with your 3rd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2019 2:40:00 PM

This is a very good haiku, Joseph, and I especially admire the last line. It appears your poem gave people some welcome summer memories. It's been around 80 at night here, but maybe you have been inspired by spring's arrival. Hugs, carolyn

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/24/2019 11:50:00 AM

I am floating on your words. :) The wind is carrying me along cotton candy clouds, while the sunshine smiles in my hair. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Summertime is near. ~ Brandy

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/24/2019 10:47:00 AM

Beautiful drifting haiku on Summer, Joseph. Good Luck!