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Floating Melodies

summer's dulcet song
 rises with dawn then softly...
 drifts on twilight's glow

 5-24-19
 Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku Contest
 Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Sara Kendrick

July 12, 2019 at 2:25 PM

"Tis enjoyable the summer song just not the heat. Thanks for the visit to my blog. Sara

David William Breidenthal

July 7, 2019 at 1:58 AM

Delightful and fantastic poem! -JWE

Gershon Wolf

June 26, 2019 at 12:44 PM

This one drifts along just perfectly for me...Congrats on a well-deserved win with this calming, restful haiku. :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos

June 8, 2019 at 2:01 AM

Congratulations Joseph on your win - a wonderful write an serene haiku - well done. Hugs, Jennifer.

Charles Messina

June 6, 2019 at 11:19 PM

This is a great haiku, Joseph. Best wishes for a win.

Kim Rodrigues

June 6, 2019 at 10:16 PM

A long beautiful Summer day!

Heidi Sands

June 6, 2019 at 8:44 AM

Very nice. I love the title too. Congratulations :)

Brandy Nicole

May 30, 2019 at 1:11 PM

Congratulations Joseph, on this win. This is a beautiful melody indeed. :) Brandy

Eve Roper

May 27, 2019 at 9:59 PM

Joseph, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Silent One

May 27, 2019 at 9:55 AM

Sounds lovely... Sweet haiku

Constance La France

May 27, 2019 at 9:55 AM

Joseph congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku!

Joseph May

May 27, 2019 at 12:04 PM

Thank you for my placement DH....

Ralph Sergi

May 26, 2019 at 7:19 PM

Congratulations, Joseph!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

May 26, 2019 at 6:14 PM

So beautifully penned

Andrea Dietrich

May 26, 2019 at 3:13 PM

this poem is lovely like a melody. Congrats on the list. I really enjoyed this one, Joseph.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 26, 2019 at 2:08 PM

- A lovely picture, Joseph :) - Congratulations with your 3rd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

May 24, 2019 at 2:40 PM

This is a very good haiku, Joseph, and I especially admire the last line. It appears your poem gave people some welcome summer memories. It's been around 80 at night here, but maybe you have been inspired by spring's arrival. Hugs, carolyn

Brandy Nicole

May 24, 2019 at 11:50 AM

I am floating on your words. :) The wind is carrying me along cotton candy clouds, while the sunshine smiles in my hair. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Summertime is near. ~ Brandy