Constance La France Poet Verse

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Floating In the Blue

And in my dream-   I am floating in fantasy blue,
            where calm aqua water caresses my tranquility;
and the vistas are wondrous below the deep misty azure sky,
      oh, I am drifting toward a tropical secluded island.

            Submerged above, below, around in splendor,
and my spirit comes gliding as a lovely white bird hovering;
      oh, utterly beautiful is this island of emerald green.

           Little fish like gems come to kiss my toes with love;
there are no crashing waves, no sounds, just sweet stillness,
        and in my dream-  I am floating in a fantasy.

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January 10, 2016 (Edit)

Poetry/Verse/Floating in the Blue
Copyright Protected, ID 16-1103-957-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted into Standard Contest 540
sponsor, Brian Strand

First Place

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L. J. Carber January 13, 2019 at 7:21 AM Congrats D.H. on your win, and I really dig the great imagery centering on my favorite color! Constance La France January 15, 2019 at 11:28 PM LJ, thanks for visiting and for the congrats ~

Paul Callus January 12, 2019 at 2:40 PM Wow! I envy you swimming in that lovely calm water surrounded by magical beauty, Constance! What a contrast from the cold rainy days we've been having over here!! Congratulations on placing tops. Regards // paul Constance La France January 15, 2019 at 11:29 PM Paul, thanks for the great comment and the congratulations ~

Carolyn Devonshire January 12, 2019 at 10:21 AM From your vivid description, I should think you have spent some time in the Caribbean, Dear Heart. Now you've made me eager to return. Want to come along? You know how I love fish, so the thought of them kissing our toes is truly a delight. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Constance La France January 15, 2019 at 11:30 PM Carolyn, thanks for the comment and congrats, have never been to the Caribbean except in my dreams, in books and on tv ~