Floating Golden Leaves

Golden colored leaves
Floating in the river
Flowing in the stream
Going forward flow
Not knowing where
To go in the fate of time
Worries may go
And happiness fulfilled
Unison as they move
In multitude like ships
Floating in company
Life smooth sailing
In the ocean of survival
May or may not arrive
In this pursuit of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 4:00 PM
Hello Hugo, Those leaves that are falling from the trees, go anywhere. In the forest and rivers ,and ponds, streams, lakes. They go everywhere. Much love here. /Darlene/
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November 23, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Hello Hugo, That is true the leaves never know where they will end up. In the city, it is sis the dump. No one rakes leaves in the water. Yes none then an entity Love you more. /Darlene/
Sarvida Jr. Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Life is like leaves floating in the water. We do not know where it end goes. We rely on the current where it led us. Some leaves submerge at the bottom, some survive, gone to the sea and disappeared. Many leaves fall in tributaries: rivers, ponds, streams, lakes or the likes, they go in uncertainty; for falling leaves is just nothing, non-entity to many. Thank you, Darlene for sharing your thoughts. Love you more each day./Go Hugo.
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