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Floating Golden Leaves

Golden colored leaves Floating in the river Flowing in the stream Going forward flow Not knowing where To go in the fate of time Worries may go And happiness fulfilled Unison as they move In multitude like ships Floating in company Life smooth sailing In the ocean of survival May or may not arrive In this pursuit of life.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/21/2024 4:00:00 PM

Hello Hugo, Those leaves that are falling from the trees, go anywhere. In the forest and rivers ,and ponds, streams, lakes. They go everywhere. Much love here. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/23/2024 11:09:00 AM

Hello Hugo, That is true the leaves never know where they will end up. In the city, it is sis the dump. No one rakes leaves in the water. Yes none then an entity Love you more. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 11/21/2024 6:52:00 PM

Life is like leaves floating in the water. We do not know where it end goes. We rely on the current where it led us. Some leaves submerge at the bottom, some survive, gone to the sea and disappeared. Many leaves fall in tributaries: rivers, ponds, streams, lakes or the likes, they go in uncertainty; for falling leaves is just nothing, non-entity to many. Thank you, Darlene for sharing your thoughts. Love you more each day./Go Hugo.