Flirty Sunflowers

Flirty Sunflowers
sultry sunflowers stretch long necks to kiss the sun … on tippy tiptoes
08-01-2014 Contest: Any Poem Under 5 lines #1 Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Placement: 4th
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Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:12 AM
A definite FAVE for me. Superb, Pandita.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:29 AM
This is also one of my faves! Thank you kindly for your wonderful support, my friend. Warmest regards. Pandita
Michaels Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 5:55 AM
Am loving your flower-themed Haiku (this one and "Daring Daffodils" especially). In fact, you've inspired me to write one of my own this morning ("Luscious Lilies"); I hope you like it!
Sietesantos Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Hi John, I thank you kindly for your wonderful compliments and support, my friend. I will most definitely check out "Luscious Lilies!" Warmest regards. Pandita
Kinch  Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Brilliant use of words creating a perfect picture.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 11:45 AM
Dear Elizabeth, I thank you kindly for your wonderful compliments and support, my friend. You are so very encouraging. Warmest regards. Pandita
Martin Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:18 PM
Hey good one, Pandita. Thanks for stopping by. Enjoyed this haiku very much!
Sietesantos Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Hi Thomas, thank you for visiting and for leaving such high praises for this piece! I really appreciate it, my friend! Warmest regards, Pandita.
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 3:52 AM
Oho Oho. It's a problem to go to a sunflower now. Happily or sadly., I am not the Sun. Your poems are always a pleasure. Enjoying winter? Hugs....RAJAT
Sietesantos Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 9:09 AM
I thank you kindly, Rajit, for your lovely compliments which I so much appreciate! With summer gone, there are not too many sunflowers around right now. In fact today is quite chilly and while I can see a few roses still lingering, my garden is looking rather shabby. Warmest regards! Pandita
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 5:55 AM
really bright beautiful vision painted
Sietesantos Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 2:52 PM
I thank you kindly, Liam, for your wonderful compliments! Have a lovely week, my friend! Pandita
A   Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:16 AM
thank you for the sweet reply
Ayala Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 2:02 PM
This is so beautiful! I love it! The imagery is fantastic! Congratulations to you on your win for this wonderful piece! Kika
Sietesantos Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 2:08 PM
Thank you so much, Kika, for your congratulations which I dearly appreciate. Warmest regards. Pandita
Beharry Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Reading this reminded me of the work of the original Japanese Haiku masters like Basho! Congrats, Pandita! Well Done!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 12:53 PM
John, I adore the Japanese Haiku masters so this is one of the best compliments ever to have my work mentioned in a sentence that refers to them! Thank you so much, my friend! Pandita
M V Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 12:49 PM
Hi Fabiyas, I thank you kindly for your wonderful compliments and support, my friend. Warmest regards. Pandita
Trichet Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Loved it Pandita. Passionate paramour!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 9:39 PM
Mark, thank you for stopping by with your great compliments and I am very happy that you loved this one which happens to be one of my favorite writes! Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 6:04 PM
one of the best of them on the list. Should be in top three!!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Thank you so much for honoring my work with this superlative compliment! Andrea, I am grateful for the encouragement. Warmest regards. Pandita
Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 5:37 AM
You find romance in the sunflowers. Lovely images. Pandita. congrats
Sietesantos Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 7:59 AM
Hi Dr. Ram, I thank you so very much for your lovely compliments which I truly appreciate! Warmest regards to you! Pandita
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 5:33 AM
Prodigious ...Way to go..Congrats..Sara
Sietesantos Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Thank you so much, Sara, for returning with your congratulations which I dearly appreciate. Warmest regards. Pandita
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 4:56 AM
stunning imagery many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Sietesantos Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Thank you dear friend for your wonderful compliment! Warmest regards. Pandita
A   Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 9:46 PM
Pandita :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~
Sietesantos Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Many thanks dear Linda for once again honoring me with a placement in your contest! Have a wonderful day! Pandita
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Great one..So inspiringly creative..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Sietesantos Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Sara, thank you so much for your kind compliments! Warmest regards.
Hyder Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 3:21 AM
created a wow effect!!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Thank you dear friend for your wonderful compliment! Warmest regards. Pandita
K. Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Reading this made me smile, you sure give sunflowers so much character here, Pandita! Wonderful! And thank you for passing by my poem with your kind words!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 8:04 PM
I thank you kindly for your lovely compliments which I so much appreciate! Warmest regards, my friend! Pandita
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Love the imagery..:) kudos on the win:)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Thank you dear friend for your sweet compliments. Warm regards. Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 9:31 PM
I'm GLAd I made your day. Just now seeing your reply to me (I have the reply notification turned off , so I never know if people have replied to me)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 8:52 AM
Hi Andrea, nice to hear from you. Have a wonderful Sunday! Pandita
Callus Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 10:28 AM
A top 7 rating for this enchantingly beautiful haiku, Pandita! You sweep me off my feet! Well done! // paul
Sietesantos Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 8:51 AM
My dear friend, Paul, you always honor me with your wonderful praises. Thank you so much for appreciating my efforts on this piece! Have a great day! Pandita
Glenister Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Sent a shiver through me..right to my toes :). Love it. The imagery is perfect. Thank you Pandita.
Sietesantos Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Craig, I am humbled by your superlative compliment! Thank you so kindly for your wonderful encouragement which means a lot to me. Pandita
Onclaud Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 12:38 PM
sunflowers tiptoeing; such a delightful; aha moment, pandita.. by the way, congrats on your wins.. huggs
Sietesantos Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, for your sweet comments and kind compliments. I am very happy that you enjoyed this piece! Warmest regards to you!
Horsman Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 11:34 AM
wow the imagery is amazing,,quality haiku is this
Sietesantos Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 5:31 PM
Hi Harry, thank you so very much for your lovely compliments which I so much appreciate! Warmest regards, my friend!
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