Flirting With a Butterfly

Her face assumed a distant air,
A strong veil of old sadness.
She was relatively still young.
A butterfly in her prime of life.
Yet she felt heaviness of heart
That only age could explain.
She had seen him with other girls,
Younger butterflies than she.
Handsome as he was,
He was an attraction in the town.

Suddenly she realized he was free,
And began to notice her as she walked in the public garden.
He saw her as a butterfly, flitting from flower to flower
But he never stayed long, she was convinced.

She smiled, a sudden change of brightness.
He would realize she was not so old after all.
Her face was smooth, an evanescent of age
And wrinkles.  Her eye glimmered with mirth. 
Afterall wasn’t she as beautiful as any other butterfly?

Perhaps he would ask her out.  Would she accept?
It would not last, she knew him too well.
Too many butterflies for her liking.
So, she’ll decline politely and show him the door.

It did not take him too long to ask her for a date.
Absentmindedly, she gladly accepted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dome Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 12:12 AM
Love this. so visual. well done. Pete.
Daniel Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 10:44 PM
Ah! She knew yet succumbed to her feelings, well written, Victor:)
Crabtree Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 4:50 PM
Young love ;)
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 2:42 PM
oh what a fun ending. We think she will be wise, but no, she gives in. Love this.
Rose  Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 12:29 PM
I love a good love story that ends well, thank you for penning a sentimental one to my liking, Blessings dear Victor.
Dome Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 9:15 AM
Kind of sad but what a great clever write. well done.
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 7:18 AM
- She was a very special butterfly, Victor - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 6:17 AM
They say love is blind but you sometimes have to live for the moment. Tom
Pandit Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 5:36 AM
Love can be blind--she knows him, may be she will teach him a lesson. As always, your story held my attention from start to finish, Victor.
Mcintosh Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 3:54 AM
Lovely Victor...
Kitchin Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 2:53 AM
Enchantingly romantic with a flirtatious flair, another great one from you Victor!
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 2:35 AM
A flitting, flirting butterfly. Very creative use of a metaphor. Very descriptive and expressive work. I wonder how long the relationship will last? Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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