Flirtatious Sun

Sun flickered 'pon your eyes
    scintillating as the seas,
dappled with the chemistry
   of a thousand swooning moons
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 9:54 PM
This offers beautiful imagery here. "A thousand swooning moons", very nice touch as it ties in with the sun. Nice work! MC
P  Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Thanks again, much appreciated!
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October 7, 2016 at 1:26 PM
Sigh, oops can guys sigh? Well too late, this was definitely sigh worthy. Beautiful Paloma
P  Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Most definitely, shows your softer side, which is absolutely necessary for poets. :)
Turner Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Boyfriend, husband, or maybe just a fantasy? I like your style, Paloma:)
P  Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 1:51 PM
All three. ;) Thanks, and i'm kidding, I don't have the energy! :)
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