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Flirtatious

spring sun, late to bed, kissed goodnight, the shy teal sky ... just to watch her blush



~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Monoku 3: Fire, Earth, Water, and Air" Poetry Contest, S1, Sponsor.

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Eve Roper

January 3, 2018 at 12:38 AM

Congratulations on your win, Gregory, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*

Susan Ashley

January 2, 2018 at 1:12 PM

Beautiful imagery. Congratulations Gregory.. ~Susan

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:36 AM

That's so sweet of you, Susan ... thank you VERY much! Blessings to you! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

January 2, 2018 at 10:12 AM

So beautiful. Congrats, Gregory.

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:35 AM

Thanks so much, Line - that's so kind of you to say! :-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

January 1, 2018 at 11:41 PM

Congratulations, Greg on your with a wonderful Monoku.

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:35 AM

Very thoughtful of you, Subimal - thank you, friend! :-)

Judith S

January 1, 2018 at 5:31 PM

Just beautiful Greg!! Amazing imagery accomplished in such few words! Congratulations on your placement!! Best, Judy

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:34 AM

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, Judy, thank you so very kindly, my friend! Blessings to you and Happy New Year! :-) <3 (I thought it might place higher than my last one - that was also a second - but I'll keep trying ... I am very proud of this one and people like it - that means a lot!). :-) <3

Rhoda Tripp

January 1, 2018 at 5:05 PM

Congratulations on your contest win, truly a great write.

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:32 AM

That's very kind of you, Rhoda, thank you so much! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich

January 1, 2018 at 3:41 PM

this is absolutely marvelous with its imagery. Congrats, for me it's a chart topper.

Gregory Richard Barden

January 3, 2018 at 12:31 AM

Thank you so very much, Andrea ... I think this is my best one-liner to date, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, my friend, (and that you placed it so highly). Blessings! :-)