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Flirtation With Ecstasy

It was so long ago yet, I can remember everything. Barely an adult, I was on holiday on the Islands In the glow of tropical sunset, I saw her a raven-haired beauty Having not yet mastered the finesse of flirtation, I struggled for something to say, perhaps a nonchalant approach! That would be unique for me. My years of teenage gallivanting had been clumsy. I had to try and so, encouraged by the voices of the palm trees in the breeze, I said hello. In my mind’s eye, I could see it. A secret rendezvous, an equatorial moon shimmers as we make love. Then, to my surprise, she returns my simple greeting, Hello, said she. Sweating my precarious position, I stumbled As I continued my awkward presentation, a scorpion crossed the corner of my eye as if to say, danger is present yet worth the risk She did acquiesce Funny, as I recall that the ecstasy was not in our clandestine encounter later that night, as we shared only simple conversation. Rather, it was that she said yes. 5/6/18 Contest: 8 Difficult words Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Date: 5/16/2018 1:23:00 AM
Love this - effortless natural flow - Takes me back too - a nostalgic masterpiece. V
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/16/2018 8:22:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Virginia. I certainly appreciate your kind words xxoo
Date: 5/15/2018 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/15/2018 5:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Susan xxoo
Date: 5/14/2018 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Mike :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/14/2018 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi, I was very happy about it xxoo
Date: 5/12/2018 9:48:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Mike. Well done.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/13/2018 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Line xxoo
Date: 5/12/2018 6:54:00 PM
Congratulations Mike, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/12/2018 6:58:00 PM
Thank you so much,Emile I am so very pleased, xxoo
Date: 5/9/2018 7:30:00 PM
Love it! Well-put, and its truth resonates with me loudly and clearly! Should do well in the contest, you'd think... ~ Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/9/2018 8:17:00 PM
Thanks, I do hope she likes it!!’
Date: 5/8/2018 1:33:00 PM
Very clever and impressive with a point made that is so very, very true. All around this is a great read, light weight and deep both, it is completely entertaining. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/8/2018 2:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Caycay, I really appreciate your thoughts xxoo
Date: 5/6/2018 1:00:00 PM
Hello Mike, to me this reads as a romantic poem not a narrative poem. I enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.xxxx-oooo.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/6/2018 3:55:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, perhaps it is both, maybe, as always, I appreciate your kind words xxoo
Date: 5/6/2018 10:44:00 AM
I hope Emile loves this excellent poem as much as I did, you wove the words into a wonderful tale...that reads like a distant memory :-) hugs jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/6/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan it actually is a memory and distant xxoo
Date: 5/6/2018 10:17:00 AM
Excellent poem--awesome ending. Din't realize you used those difficult words until the end as your poem flows so wonderfully..a simple but elegant story..this should be a top win, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/6/2018 4:00:00 PM
You are very kind Vijay, I really appreciate your encouragement, Happy Sunday!!!
Date: 5/6/2018 9:39:00 AM
Well written for the contest Mike! Happy Sunday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/6/2018 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, I love how you are always so encouraging, Happy Sunday xxoo
Date: 5/6/2018 9:19:00 AM
A most endearing and lovely shyness. I particularly loved your lines "and so, encouraged by the voices of the palm trees in the breeze, I said hello" and your wrap up of course. Superbly done Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/6/2018 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line and Happy Sunday to you xxoo

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