Flirtation With Ecstasy

It was so long ago
yet, I can remember everything. 
Barely an adult, I was on holiday on the Islands

In the glow of tropical sunset, I saw her
a raven-haired beauty
Having not yet mastered the finesse of flirtation,
I struggled for something to say, perhaps
a nonchalant approach!
That would be unique for me.
My years of teenage gallivanting had 
been clumsy. 
I had to try
and so,  encouraged by the 
voices of the palm trees in the breeze,
I said hello.

In my mind’s eye, I could see it.
A secret rendezvous,
an equatorial moon shimmers
as we make love.

Then, to my surprise, she returns
my simple greeting,
Hello, said she.
Sweating my precarious position,
I stumbled

As I continued my awkward presentation,
a scorpion crossed the corner of my eye
as if to say, danger is present 
yet worth the risk

She did acquiesce 

Funny, as I recall that the ecstasy
was not in our clandestine encounter
later that night,
as we shared only simple conversation.

Rather, it was that she said yes.


5/6/18
Contest: 8 Difficult words
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
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Waters Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 1:23 AM
Love this - effortless natural flow - Takes me back too - a nostalgic masterpiece. V
Gentile Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Thank you so very much, Virginia. I certainly appreciate your kind words xxoo
Gentry Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
Gentile Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 5:21 PM
Thanks so much Susan xxoo
Sands Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations for your win Mike :)
Gentile Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi, I was very happy about it xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Mike. Well done.
Gentile Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Thanks Line xxoo
Pinet Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Congratulations Mike, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Gentile Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Thank you so much,Emile I am so very pleased, xxoo
Wolf Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Love it! Well-put, and its truth resonates with me loudly and clearly! Should do well in the contest, you'd think... ~ Gershon
Gentile Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:17 PM
Thanks, I do hope she likes it!!’
Godwin Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Very clever and impressive with a point made that is so very, very true. All around this is a great read, light weight and deep both, it is completely entertaining. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Gentile Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Thanks so much, Caycay, I really appreciate your thoughts xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 1:00 PM
Hello Mike, to me this reads as a romantic poem not a narrative poem. I enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.xxxx-oooo.
Gentile Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Thanks Darlene, perhaps it is both, maybe, as always, I appreciate your kind words xxoo
Allison Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 10:44 AM
I hope Emile loves this excellent poem as much as I did, you wove the words into a wonderful tale...that reads like a distant memory :-) hugs jan xx
Gentile Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Thanks so much Jan it actually is a memory and distant xxoo
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 10:17 AM
Excellent poem--awesome ending. Din't realize you used those difficult words until the end as your poem flows so wonderfully..a simple but elegant story..this should be a top win, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 4:00 PM
You are very kind Vijay, I really appreciate your encouragement, Happy Sunday!!!
Sands Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Well written for the contest Mike! Happy Sunday :)
Gentile Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thank you Heidi, I love how you are always so encouraging, Happy Sunday xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 9:19 AM
A most endearing and lovely shyness. I particularly loved your lines "and so, encouraged by the voices of the palm trees in the breeze, I said hello" and your wrap up of course. Superbly done Mike.
Gentile Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thank you so much, Line and Happy Sunday to you xxoo
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