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Flirtation

he looked at me and whispered low ~ if ye ken my meaning, lass, say so

aye, I knew what those eyes meant ~ I smiled at him, and my answer was sent
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Croft Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 12:52 PM
Romance in two lines! Love it.
Lane Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 6:05 AM
Merci. Karen.
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 6:28 AM
A brilliant rhyming monoku Lin, one which tells its own story, even without a title, flirtation personified, not always easy to to get across, in two short lines, cheers David
Lane Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 6:51 AM
I wrote it in my phone notes months ago and forgot about. Thanks for the compliments
M  Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 2:45 PM
Just brilliant Lin!! Romantic and the last line perfect! Debx
Lane Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Thank you very much for noticing it’s a new one, Deb. I like this length.
M  Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 6:29 AM
P.S….l love your new profile photo Lin you look lovely! I really like that hair style on you! Debx
Lane Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 2:51 PM
Hi Deb and thanks for the comments, Chick. Sending you soup mail.
Lawless Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 2:20 PM
Oh, you coquettish nymph you.....
Lane Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 2:40 PM
Watch it, or I'll start batting my eyelashes at you. ;-) Thanks, John.
Cunningham Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 8:33 AM
The eyes say it all Lin. Tom
Lane Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 11:31 AM
I truly believe that, Tom. Thank you.
Alhemaidy Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 8:14 AM
cool flirtation!
Lane Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Thank you for liking this one, ~AA.
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