Flipped Hourglass

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Thought spirals Eating us alive Remorselessly Gnawing our soul We lift our hand As a stop signal The bubbles burst Noiselessly In staid silence Tranquil equipoise Flow of time ends Melding with the void Awareness self-aware Porous and receptive Invites bliss currents To suffuse our heart Dance of polarities Rotates with each breath Essence of presence Celebrates divine union 01-February-2022

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/1/2022 12:51:00 PM

Stop the noise! Only in silence can we communicate with our soul. Only in silence is Truth revealed. Bravo, Gershon

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/1/2022 6:47:00 PM

Thanks, GW

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/1/2022 4:51:00 AM

Equipoise, another great word. Another great word, :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/1/2022 4:50:00 AM

This is truly beautiful and what a wonderful title you came up with, I can feel your spirituality brimming with every word I read. Thank you for always enriching my life :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/1/2022 6:01:00 AM

Oh! That’s a contest prompt! Edward has offered four titles, so I’ve written a poem on each of them :)