Flinching

FLINCHING

           I am sure to flinch
      when flying cockroach approaches me.

      In zoo, I always avoid the zone of snakes.
      Snakes moving spirally
      shake my body inch by inch.

           I am sure to flinch if I descry
            a spider close to me.
             If it crawls or runs, I am sure to yell or cry.
              Arachne phobia 
             is my worst weakness.

            I think, if I meet a tiger in front with mouth agape
           and see snake at back
            with cockroach and spider on both sides,
             I will rush to tiger to escape.

    06/16/19
                    Second Place

  'What Makes You Flinch' Contest by Julie Leigh Rodeheaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sergi Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Congratulations, Anisha: As a child, I hated cockroachzsbut as time went by I was in places where there were bigger ones. I overcame my fear and realized I was a mountain compared to them!
Dutta Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 11:36 PM
Thanks for visit n appreciation. For your information, insects hold no DISTINCT vision to consider us giants. They just sense a hazy shadow. Best Wishes.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 6:28 PM
We had flying creepy cockroaches in Hawaii! Would joke when we came back to the house after “bombing” with spray (Navy Housing) that they were probably sitting on top of the can as if on drugs...”hey man...” Great write! Congratulations, Anisha!
Dutta Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Thanks Kim. Blessing
Mitra Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 4:11 AM
Wonderful... Unique
Dutta Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 10:34 AM
Thanks n Blessing
Roper Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 9:08 PM
I jump and scream when I see roaches, snakes.. Great write for the contest, Anisha, good luck.. Hugs
Dutta Avatar
June 20, 2019 at 10:34 AM
Thanks n Regards
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