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Flimsy Heart

fluid enclosed me trapped in memory my heart in a husk feel the bow... of anguish candle fire... firefly your face I love dereliction are cheering oars are fading... on the shore I hope you keep the image forever sung in the heart Written: September 26, 2022

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/27/2022 9:15:00 AM

I loved this poem for its imagery.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 9/26/2022 6:32:00 PM

"oars are fading" so simple, direct and evocative! I can hear them... Elizabeth

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/26/2022 6:27:00 PM

Dear Lasaad, your beautiful imagery takes my breath away. I relish the splendor of your golden pen. A poem to feel and admire.. “my heart in a husk” wow! Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan