Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

Flimsy Heart

fluid enclosed me
trapped in memory
my heart in a husk
feel the bow... 
of anguish
candle fire...
firefly
your face I love
dereliction are cheering
oars are fading... 
on the shore
I hope 
you keep the image
forever sung 
in the heart

Written: September 26, 2022

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Victor Buhagiar September 27, 2022 at 9:15 AM I loved this poem for its imagery.

Elizabeth Mccann September 26, 2022 at 6:32 PM "oars are fading" so simple, direct and evocative! I can hear them... Elizabeth

Susan Ashley September 26, 2022 at 6:27 PM Dear Lasaad, your beautiful imagery takes my breath away. I relish the splendor of your golden pen. A poem to feel and admire.. “my heart in a husk” wow! Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan