Flight To Mars

Dim pink lights  blossom in the air
A rat trapped plotted wisely to attract lover
I was sitting just below the full moon
Not for trapped but for consideration. 

 They were engaged deeply
So brain couldn't think rationally
Questions questions questions they asked
To make a foolproof colony on the Mars. 
  
  We designed a radiation free cell to live
A lab to research, solar plates to illuminate
A piece of landscape to cultivate
But it was not sufficient to live on the Mars. 

   We're very close to produce water
With slight change in the wind mill
Nitrogen chilled it's feathers can condense
. 02 water vapour of the air on the Mars. 
 
 In crystal blue sky
Our desires got feathers to fly
Someone was planning to live on the Mars
Other one was ready to broadcast his task. 

 But previous night episode
Distracted completely me to think more
I couldn't respond them
What does Mars need to live more.

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Date: 3/29/2023 12:23:00 PM
I think you must be very interested in space exploration, Jeff. A fascinating poem.
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Date: 1/16/2023 7:41:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Date: 11/13/2022 8:31:00 PM
I agree with Jeff, Below comment, Arjun. So much to ponder upon, reaching out into space, yet we do need to learn after all these past centuries, to live as a family here on earth. Fascinated poetry. Love it..Harry
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Arjun Jangid
Date: 11/15/2022 12:55:00 AM
Heartily thanks for your advice and love. Sir Iam agree with you that we should live like a family on this planet. But a mathematician think above it. We need second home to live amongst increasing tensions , rivalry etc. Someday a mistake will burn all . So i think about a new home for us.
Date: 10/18/2022 6:55:00 AM
Strange thinking about all that goes into trying to live in such a hostile environment, isn't it? Makes you think it would be easier to work on cleaning up our own, for fear we just transport the same messes to the stars.... Enjoyed, Arjun!
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Arjun Jangid
Date: 10/18/2022 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Sir For your valuable question and comment.Mr Jeff Kyser have a pleasant and wonderful day.
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