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Flight of Fall

As I lay one sullen autumn morn on pearl dew turf with the day unborn staring at the grey grimacing sky with the mood and moment not quite high sepulchral static wherever I looked when my dreary dizzy gaze was hooked at a lone leaf's death-descent down to join its wilted kin on ground then a sudden silent slithering breeze deprived me of my warmth and ease and the disturbed withered shroud of Fall hustled revived in a rustling brawl hurled and curled in the fading mist till the whispering winds chose to desist but Nature lies dead once again until the wind resumes,retrieves restrain and I know this flight of life is brief for I'm none other than a fallen leaf.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/9/2011 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Aseem. Love Carol
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Date: 3/7/2011 4:34:00 PM
Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 12/16/2010 2:11:00 AM
great piece Aseem! congrats on having your wonderful piece being featured this week, hope you have many more interesting features. keep you pen writing. great you! Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 12/16/2010 2:05:00 AM
great piece Aseem! congrats on having your wonderful piece being featured this week, hope you have many more interesting features. keep you pen writing. great you! Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:46:00 PM
Hi Aseem.This is a beautifully written piece.You have used some good creative images.I liked the flow of your words.And how you don't reveal what you are till the last line.Clever.Glad you made our home page.I enjoyed reading you.Thank you .Love June(Sylvia)
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Date: 12/14/2010 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Aseem. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2010 2:09:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today and its creative theme.. hope u will check out the contest scene offered to new members and good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/20/2010 10:20:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Aseem. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2010 4:50:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup, such a nice poem, well written, love the analogy between the leaf and yourself.
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:58:00 PM
Hi Aseem I think this is so beautiful.Your use of words that convey such lovely images, you feed my imagination with your wonderful impressions of nature down to your personification of a leaf.Lovely! luv June
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Date: 10/19/2010 12:40:00 PM
That was a great poem, it was very smooth and visual.
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