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Flight of a Sparrow

Don't light a wick that will not burn
I only ask that your shadows stay dark
for willing I am not, in want of a turn
to howl as a wolf or a dog's baying bark

To spurn you, who has not known touch
would chill flowing of blood in any soul
Without ardor in moonlight as a crutch
a body has no will of its own, nor control

Virginal and insipid is an innocuous mind
No guilt flows through its virtuous marrow
A body can waltz although sight is blind
as much as joy is found in flight of a sparrow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Daniel Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 9:50 AM
Lovely rhyme for a tough challenge, Lin😊 I spotted one 'the' though...
Lane Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 9:55 AM
Thanks for your keen eyes and the comments, Joanna.
Kitchin Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 4:22 PM
Lin, love this poem and the imagery, a great poem for the challenge. A fav too.
Lane Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 4:38 AM
Thanks a lot, Tania.
Gibbons Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 9:32 AM
Wow Lin amazing write gorgeous pic too breathtaking 🕊️🌙✨well done on weekly challenge no e is a challenge hmmm 🤔 a fav I love ❤️last powerful line hugzzz friend x hey I must count how many fav on my list written by you I'm sure your the lead 😊
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 9:56 AM
awww Dotti, you are such a kind-hearted friend. Don't let my poetry dominate your favorite's list. Thank you for your encouragement and support. ❤️
Toney Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 8:24 AM
Lin, this is an intriguing exploration of restraint and desire, with the sparrow’s flight providing a graceful closing image. Like Baretta’s Theme song lyrics, “Keep your eye on the sparrow, when the going gets narrow.” A Fav. 😉
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 8:29 AM
Thanks a bunch, Mark. It was written for the weekly challenge of not using the letter 'e.' A real challenge as you know... but fun! ✨
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