Flickering Flame

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Flickering flame, steadied by love Transmuting consciousness Baptised in the stream from above Unbroken awareness Bliss transfixed attention Is our meditation Heart’s orientation Ego urge tame Flickering flame 02-February-2022 Quietus

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Constance La France

Date: 2/2/2022 1:20:00 PM

Seeker, wonderful poem and another inspiration to write in your Quietus form ~ Constance

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/2/2022 7:00:00 PM

There’s a contest underway in Quietus form :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2022 1:02:00 PM

you are the master of Quietus!!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/2/2022 6:59:00 PM

I don’t know about that, Andrea but I confess that I’m sort of drawn to this form.