Flickering Candle

A candle flickered when you gone
Announcing that you passed away
To the world when no one come back
Leaving a sorrow that instill to the mind
The walls that witnessed your departure












2-8-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Henderson Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Never no way! Peace and many blessings to you.
Negron Flores Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Thank you Steven
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