Flicker of Love

Losing the belonging in debris of broken heart
to the silent shore of sorrow I had sauntered.
My emotions swirled like dislodged moist sands
in the tide of remote time when you were mine.

On the rolling sea made of billion drops of tear
descended somber shadow of night’s slate sky,
split unseen by the flying flash of a shooting star, 
dissolving like memory on the horizon of oblivion.

Transient flame of trajectory of consumed desire
furrowed in my mind a blazing trail of yearning, 
that I wished I could follow with the shooting star,
even if it was transitory like the flicker of my love.

I slept on the desolate edge of the lonely night,
you became in my dreaming sky a shining star,
briefly sparkling so far away, yet adoringly so near,
but you disappeared, for I didn’t dream enough.

Written : August 14, 2019
February 23, 2020
Contest : Strand Select Y, Any Form, Any Theme
Sponsor : Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Mcgee Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 8:03 AM
A wonderful take on the contest. Congrats on your win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 6:14 AM
You have written such a magnificent poem Subimal! The longing for the past with aching heart is incredibly beautiful. This is going into my Faves my friend. Congratulations on your deserving honor of Second Place! : ) xxoo
Scars Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 11:15 AM
wow amazing sweet Subimal. Why no comments, idk, lovely and beautiful. As always a gifted writer indeed :)-luloo
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace