Flick It Away

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Thoughts that arise, oft hold us in surprise Seeming to be of foreign origin Flicked away before ego does apprise If we meddle not, all thoughts are virgin We look and release, flowing like the breeze Resting narrow thought construct perception Dweller of the void, living life in ease Unaffected by the world external Blissful presence, with nothing to appease Choosing thus, the throb of bliss eternal Be to become, a living miracle 21-March-2021

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/21/2021 9:33:00 AM

Very insightful and interesting piece of work, U.S. I enjoyed reading it. I suspect we too often "meddle" with our thoughts and sully their original meanings. I wanted more!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/21/2021 9:16:00 PM

Thank you, Milton!