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Flexible Flyer

two sleds me and my brothers rest against my wall every night the same debate blah, blah, blah.... lost youth ... or... blah, blah, blah... forever young

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/17/2009 7:52:00 AM

The pure immortality of it ... O to dream and claim our dreams again. Very inspiring, Sir.

Kim Hilliker

Date: 11/21/2009 11:14:00 AM

We are forever young in spirit. Nice write James

James Fraser

Date: 11/6/2009 4:13:00 PM

Still a lovely topic, siblings looking back >> nice write James >> James

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/6/2009 3:10:00 PM

F O R E V E R Y O U N G--:)Charma

John Freeman

Date: 11/6/2009 11:31:00 AM

Yeaaasss! and the debate will continue, masterful Fibonacci, James. Good job! Sincerely, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/6/2009 3:11:00 AM

Powerful write, Jim. My sister and I have similar debates. You have taken us from the "James Brothers" to James' Brothers. Pardon the pun -- just had to add my two cents. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/5/2009 9:24:00 AM

Forever young, yes. Fun to remember between brothers. A bond is felt there. Nice Fibonacci, interesting last line. Makes me smile. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/5/2009 7:31:00 AM

I love this poem. My brother and I always vowed we would never lament our growing older....but of course, we do! He still challenges me as if we were sibling rivals...that is something we never grow too old to do!! Loved this!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2009 7:08:00 AM

Acceptance is the key. Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara

Lena Townsend

Date: 11/4/2009 11:24:00 PM

Siblings, such a wonderful treasure, as are the memories that we share with them. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/4/2009 10:57:00 PM

I have 2 brothers and this sounds like us too, nice work JMG...Raul