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Flexible Flyer

two
sleds
me and
my brothers
rest against my wall
every night the same debate
blah, blah, blah.... lost youth ... or... blah, blah, blah... forever young

Copyright © James Marshall Goff | Year Posted 2009

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L'Nass Shango Date: 12/17/2009 7:52:00 AM The pure immortality of it ... O to dream and claim our dreams again. Very inspiring, Sir. Login to Reply

Kim Hilliker Date: 11/21/2009 11:14:00 AM We are forever young in spirit. Nice write James Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 11/6/2009 4:13:00 PM Still a lovely topic, siblings looking back >> nice write James >> James Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/6/2009 3:10:00 PM F O R E V E R Y O U N G--:)Charma Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 11/6/2009 11:31:00 AM Yeaaasss! and the debate will continue, masterful Fibonacci, James. Good job! Sincerely, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/6/2009 3:11:00 AM Powerful write, Jim. My sister and I have similar debates. You have taken us from the "James Brothers" to James' Brothers. Pardon the pun -- just had to add my two cents. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 11/5/2009 9:24:00 AM Forever young, yes. Fun to remember between brothers. A bond is felt there. Nice Fibonacci, interesting last line. Makes me smile. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 11/5/2009 7:31:00 AM I love this poem. My brother and I always vowed we would never lament our growing older....but of course, we do! He still challenges me as if we were sibling rivals...that is something we never grow too old to do!! Loved this! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/5/2009 7:08:00 AM Acceptance is the key. Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply

Lena Townsend Date: 11/4/2009 11:24:00 PM Siblings, such a wonderful treasure, as are the memories that we share with them. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 11/4/2009 10:57:00 PM I have 2 brothers and this sounds like us too, nice work JMG...Raul Login to Reply