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Flexible Flyer

two
sleds
me and
my brothers
rest against my wall
every night the same debate
blah, blah, blah.... lost youth ... or... blah, blah, blah... forever young

introspectionfibonacci

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L'Nass Shango

December 17, 2009 at 7:52 AM

The pure immortality of it ... O to dream and claim our dreams again. Very inspiring, Sir.

Kim Hilliker

November 21, 2009 at 11:14 AM

We are forever young in spirit. Nice write James

James Fraser

November 6, 2009 at 4:13 PM

Still a lovely topic, siblings looking back >> nice write James >> James

Charmaine Chircop

November 6, 2009 at 3:10 PM

F O R E V E R Y O U N G--:)Charma

John Freeman

November 6, 2009 at 11:31 AM

Yeaaasss! and the debate will continue, masterful Fibonacci, James. Good job! Sincerely, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

November 6, 2009 at 3:11 AM

Powerful write, Jim. My sister and I have similar debates. You have taken us from the "James Brothers" to James' Brothers. Pardon the pun -- just had to add my two cents. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

November 5, 2009 at 9:24 AM

Forever young, yes. Fun to remember between brothers. A bond is felt there. Nice Fibonacci, interesting last line. Makes me smile. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Carrie Richards

November 5, 2009 at 7:31 AM

I love this poem. My brother and I always vowed we would never lament our growing older....but of course, we do! He still challenges me as if we were sibling rivals...that is something we never grow too old to do!! Loved this!